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Have to do the work


When I originally wrote Black Mask & Pale Rider, I just wrote and based a lot of the story on aspects of spaghetti westerns with a little fantasy tossed in (a lot actually, considering the main characters are elves and possess magic).  I didn’t do proper research at the time.

I made a lot of mistakes as well.  I’m still proud of the end result of this first book, but there’s a lot that should and could be changed.  Prime examples are falling into a role play trap of writing out the accents fully.  That’s one thing I’ll change, especially with Pania’s.  All I really need to do is describe her accent as a lilting Irish accent and people should understand.  Shani has ended up with an Arkansas drawl, and while I’ll tone down the accent, there’s still things I call Shani-isms I’ll still keep.  “Crap on a stick”, “Hotter ‘n a June bug on a smooth rock”, “I’m so parched, I swear there’s more water in a desert”, and so forth.  I actually learned that before while writing Rocket Fox and realizing that I didn’t need to write out Senia’s lisp.  It would actually be better and easier not to, and instead just describe that yes, Senia speaks with a lisp.  Trust the reader to add that in.

Thanks to research, I’ve been able to change certain things about the characters, all the while adding in two new ones, and including three familiars (or companions).  Shani along with her sister Wren will have some customs that are much more akin to Metis in Canada.  There’s Abisayo who will have a lot of memories living with elves (and, of course, being an elf)  that associated with Yoruba people in West Africa.  The reason for that is because different cultures have similar folklore.  Elves are an incredibly broad ranging race that many different cultures had stories about.  From the Celts to the Norse to the different people of Africa, toward Asia as well, and onto North America.  It can be argued that even pre and post Islamic cultures had folklore about elves.  There are many stories about djinn and those creatures being called spirits.  Many of those descriptions aren’t that far off from the descriptions of elves, pixies and fae folk from European cultures.

While I’m doing this, adding in the extra information and cultural references as back story for Black Mask & Pale Rider, I still need to ensure that I’m being as respectful as I can to the original cultures.  And the people of colour in the book.  No describing skin as “chocolate” or “creamy”, which reminds me more of a fetish than the actual description of a person.

I’ve got a lot of work ahead of me, and it’ll be a while before the first book is released.  I just need to push aside my current addiction and I’ll be fine.

Damn you, Skyrim!

WE’RE HERE II: Black Creators of Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror in Film & Fiction

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WE’RE HERE II: Black Creators of Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror in Film & Fiction

In my last post, I provided a listing of popular fandom events with a major Black presence.

I now offer you We're Here, part II.

Coincidentally (?),  friend and fellow speculative fiction author, SR Torris, asked me, shortly after I scheduled this article to post, to check out…

Read more… 2,150 more words

If anyone's looking for a great place to find new authors, especially in the fantasy genre and the steampunk (steamfunk) genres, look through this entire blog. but this article especially is good about telling people that Black writers of fantasy, sci fi, and steampunk are out there. And now I need to plan on getting a bigger book shelf as I look through more books.

The Story of Scales: a.k.a. poetry is hard


One of the things I wished to add to the rewrite of Black Mask & Pale Rider is a series of poems introducing an aspect of the story.  For example, the introduction of Shani and the backstory of Scales, her shoulder dragon.  Most would call him a wyrmling or a psuedodragon, but he thinks of himself no different than one of the grand dragons.  Even if he is only three feet tall from the tip of his snout to the tip of his tail.

To get a good idea of this, just imagine this…

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…is sitting on the shoulder of this elven gunslinger…

shani-colourSo, without further ado, here’s the story of Scales.

Story of Scales

 

Some things grand can be very small
We often never see them
We are not looking at all
To not look, we will miss them

When one would think of dragons
We think of the grand old beasts
Filled with rage, myths of bygones
Fear or wisdom is what rests

But not all dragons are grand
When one thinks purely of size
The smallest of wings to end
Many times come as a surprise

Wyrmling, pseudo, names given
But not one are really true
They are dragons, believe in
The stories elders tell you

One such dragon lives now
The faithful guide of an elf
A rogue who saved him and how
A cage, sat on bandit shelf

His name, it is different
In the old dragon kind tongue
His name was given, was sent
One that all could rely on

Scales is the name he is called
Companion to a gun hand
Dragon of faith to behold
A name written in the sand.

Thursday morning random times


Technically, all of these appeared last night on Tumblr, so this could be Wednesday late night random times.  But that’s just semantics.

NOOOO!  Why does every stinkin' image search for Saskatchewan vs Ottawa have to bring up this image!  The Green Riders beat Ottawa in '66!  Why the photo with Tony Gabriel.

NOOOO! Why does every stinkin’ image search for Saskatchewan vs Ottawa have to bring up this image! The Green Riders beat Ottawa in ’66! Why the photo with Tony Gabriel.

Stanley Cup

So Chicago won game one of the Stanley Cup final in triple OT.

Does that mean that they played game 2 as well already?

Rough Riders – Redblacks

Ottawa has a team in the CFL again.  Yay!  Ottawa fans hate the Saskatchewan Roughriders for boycotting the use of the name Rough Rider for the new Ottawa team.  Okay, I know that there’s tradition with there being two teams named the Riders.  But seriously… suck it!  We’re the Riders.

You can be the Redblacks.

Also, friday the Riders (that’s Saskatchewan… see how much easier it is with only one team named the Riders) are in Edmonton for the first preseason game for both teams.  Saskatchewan’s first game of the season is June 29.

The XBox One

With all of the talk about the Xbox One and the very negative news coming out about the console, it’s really getting me to think that the next computer I buy is a Mac, not a PC.

There’s only one problem, and that’s running my PC games.  I’ll have to look and see if Star Trek Online, Champions Online and Guild Wars and Guild Wars 2 work under a Mac OS.

Grabbin’ the merch

Something amazing about football in this province is this.  The Saskatchewan Roughriders are one of only two publicly owned franchises in professional sports, and play in the second smallest market in North America.  The other publicly owned team and the smallest market in North America happens to be the Green Bay Packers.

The Riders also have the largest merchandise sales in the CFL, with figures that are comparable to the best selling NFL team merchandise.  Saskatchewan’s merchandise sales are the third highest in Canada, trailing only slightly behind the Toronto Maple Leafs and the Montreal Canadiens.

And yes, I’m excited for the 2013 CFL season to start, seeing how the Grey Cup will be in Regina, Saskatchewan this year.

Wednesday morning quote-fest


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On stories:

“All good stories deserve embellishment.” ~Gandalf, from The Hobbit, by J. R. R. Tolkien

“Cherish your wilderness.” ~Maxine Kumin! The poet, novelist, and essayist is a Pulitzer Prize winner and a former Poet Laureate.

“Fiction is dangerous, of course, because it lets you go inside someone else’s head.” ~Neil Gaiman, “Why Fiction is Dangerous” Book Expo America 2013

On books:

“A book is really like a lover. It arranges itself in your life in a way that is beautiful.” ~Maurice Sendak, author and illustrator of Where The Wild Things Are

“I read a book one day and my whole life was changed.” ~Orhan Pamuk, the Nobel Prize-winning Turkish writer was born in Istanbul, June 7, 1952.

On art:

“Art and love are the same thing: It’s the process of seeing yourself in things that are not you.” ~Chuck Klosterman! The journalist and essayist was born in Breckenridge, Minnesota.

On women:

“Forty-seven percent of all players are women, and women over 18 years of age are one of the industry’s fastest growing demographics. … Today, adult women represent a greater portion of the game-playing population (31 percent) than boys age 17 or younger (19 percent).” ~The Entertainment Software Association – Game Player Data

“It’s fascinating how many people think “free speech” means women are required to listen to their abuse.” ~Amanda Marcotte

Thanks for all the fish!


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I had a very quiet day yesterday, which is really a nice change of pace.  I watched some television, did some laundry, went out and had brunch, got some groceries, and played some games.

The morning was really great because it was sunny and warm, so I took a walk and enjoyed the day.

These acts may seem normal (and believe me, they are), but when things are put into context the usual response I get is “Why did you do that on your birthday” (oh yeah, yesterday was also my birthday).

Putting things into perspective, I’m 43 now (darn it! I can no longer say my age is the answer to the question of life, the universe and everything… though, it’s the question that’s more important, not the answer).  Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy references aside, birthdays should always be what the person celebrating it to be.  In other words, if it’s your birthday and you just wanna sit around in your underwear, go for it!

I honestly don’t like the attention surrounding birthdays, and I don’t make a big deal out of it (unless someone wants me to do something on my birthday that isn’t already scheduled).  And I got a lot of really awesome birthday salutations yesterday on my Facebook wall (good thing I hooked up my Blackberry to Facebook otherwise I never would have known).  That was awesome and thanks to everyone who sent out well wishes.  That, more than anything, is the best gift a person can get.

As well as the phone call from my folks.  I expected that, and it’s always nice to talk to them, whether on the phone or in person.

So, once again, to everyone who sent me well wishes, thanks.  You really made my day.

Features of the game


So I got a pleasant surprise over the weekend while playing Star Trek Online (no really, I’m not obsessed with the game, I just like to play it).  This is one of those things where a person could say “hey, that’s really cool” or “wow, now people can obsess about an MMO without actually logging into game”.  I honestly don’t know if this is the first MMO that’s done this or if it’s been done before, but the easiest way to explain it is through pictures.

This is completely online and seems to be flash based.  But the interesting thing about this once the loading screen finishes, is that this site will keep a list of your characters (don't worry, it's run through Cryptic not some third party).

This is completely online and seems to be flash based. But the interesting thing about this once the loading screen finishes, is that this site will keep a list of your characters (don’t worry, it’s run through Cryptic not some third party).

Once you log in, there are you characters ready to be viewed.  I clicked on my main character, my Federation Vice Admiral.

Once you log in, there are you characters ready to be viewed. I clicked on my main character, my Federation Vice Admiral.  As you can see, it has access to all the information about her, such as ship specs, personnel files, what accolades I’ve achieved with her and what fleet she’s a member of.

There's the ship, the U.S.S. Ocelot, tactical escort retrofit, Defiant Class.  And there's all the systems that are used to help give the Ocelot her weaponry and defense.

There’s the ship, the U.S.S. Ocelot, tactical escort retrofit, Defiant Class. And there’s all the systems that are used to help give the Ocelot her weaponry and defense.

This is the beam cutting weapon, and the basic information is given.  It does not, however, give the information about it being part of the Omega set nor does it give the extra specs that comes with having each piece.

This is the beam cutting weapon, and the basic information is given. It does not, however, give the information about it being part of the Omega set nor does it give the extra specs that comes with having each piece.

Personal page, giving all of the information about the character, such as rank, biography, weaponry, shields, armour, and so on.  You can even click on each piece to get more information about it, just as you could on the ship page.

Personal page, giving all of the information about the character, such as rank, biography, weaponry, shields, armour, and so on. You can even click on each piece to get more information about it, just as you could on the ship page.  Little disappointed that right now it has a generic figure displayed instead of my character.

You can even examine the bridge crew, clicking on each member for more information.

You can even examine the bridge crew, clicking on each member for more information.  This displays similar to the view of the main character, the one the player plays.

You can even take a look at your accolades, though it does not give you progression of accolades you haven't completed, just the accolades you've fully completed.

You can even take a look at your accolades, though it does not give you progression of accolades you haven’t completed, just the accolades you’ve fully completed.

You can even examine your fleet page, which can detail the roster, the fleet description, events that are going on (which is helpful if you want to check what's happening with the fleet so you can work that around plans).  You can also examine your star base construction progression.

You can even examine your fleet page, which can detail the roster, the fleet description, events that are going on (which is helpful if you want to check what’s happening with the fleet so you can work that around plans). You can also examine your star base construction progression.

This part's rather interesting, because you can actually contribute to whatever projects are taking place without logging into game (I  did not actually give over 10,000 dilithium to that project, I did that as an example, besides, I need that dilithium for personal projects).  You can also view the leader boards for star base and embassy projects to see who is doing most of the work (or contributing most of the resources).

This part’s rather interesting, because you can actually contribute to whatever projects are taking place without logging into game (I did not actually give over 10,000 dilithium to that project, I did that as an example, besides, I need that dilithium for personal projects). You can also view the leader boards for star base and embassy projects to see who is doing most of the work (or contributing most of the resources).

So this is kind of neat, but just so long as Cryptic decides to keep it as something you can look at and inspect and that’s it.  Don’t make a mini game of STO with a flash based engine because that will just end up giving people the excuse to play at work (if they don’t already).  There’s other things I could be doing at work.

 

 

Elves: there’s different cultures and folklore


Researching for a rewrite of a book can be time consuming and exhausting, however, it can also be rewarding.

When I began Black Mask & Pale Rider, it was just a simple story.  Now I realize it can be a lot more than just a simple story.  It can be something that can educate as well.  The elves of this story had to be different, as did the characters.  The first step was breaking from tradition and making the main characters female.  The second step was giving Shani and Pania backgrounds in folklore and myth.  Which I did find.  The third step came (happily) when I began to learn a little bit about other folklore from different cultures, and I decided that this story doesn’t need just two elves, but three.  And then four.

And so, Shani and Pania are joined by Wren, Shani’s sister.  On their world Wren in a Consoler, sort of like an undertaker with full armour, a sword and an ability to perform medical needs.  Wren is sort of like the classic Dungeons and Dragons cleric, dressed in full plate armour and carrying a sword and a shield.  Wren most likely won’t be wearing full plate, or carrying a shield, but she’s still very much like a classic cleric.

And then, I came up with the idea for the fourth character.  Abisayo Temilolu, a Yoruba elf, who comes from Nigeria and captured and sold into the slave trade.  Shani, Pania and Wren find her and free her and Abisayo joins the four (safety in numbers, expecially with your own people).  Abisayo’s name means (based on my research) born into joy; while her last name means Surrounded by God.  With that meaning I decided quite quickly that Abisayo would in fact be a paladin.  She is a holy warrior from her people.  To that end, the other three elves would feel much safer having her with them.

So these elves aren’t your basic Tolkien style elves, nor are they the basic Dungeons and Dragon elves.  They come from actual myth.  And yes, Yoruba and Iroquois had folklore about elves.  Abisayo is the only character that I did research for a name and a meaning that fit.  The other three characters all have their names written long ago.

Abisayo Temilolu, Yoruba elf.

Born into joy; Surrounded by God.

From African Archives

(iii) The Spirits

Spirits are believed to be apparitional entities which form a separate category of beings from divinities and ancestors. The Yoruba regard them as powers which are almost abstract entities that take on human shape. They are usually associated with natural phenomena like trees, rocks, rivers, lagoons, forests, bushes, hills, earth, mountains, winds, dark groves and unusual places, and these become their abode. These spirits may even inhabit animals or birds or snakes. Such objects as they inhabit are regarded as having certain mysterious powers and they may become the emblems of the spirits. The objects may be used in the preparation of magic and medicine in the belief that they possess magical significance because of the spirits residing in them.47

The spirits come under various names such as Ajija or Aja (spirit of whilrlwind with knowledge of the use of herbs), Aroni (a spirit with one leg that teaches the use of herbs), Egbere (a smallish elf that carries a small mat and weeps all the time), oro (spirits of trees), ebora, iwin (a fairy believed to live in the ground, rock, forest or hill). The actual position of these spirits in Santería and Candomblé‚ requires further investigation. But among the Yoruba, they have real existence and they can be good or bad, beneficent or malevolent. Consequently, they are propitiated out of fear. They neither have priests nor festivals like the divinities and they assume no universal worship. That may explain why they do not command much attention in the diaspora.

Shani and Wren Wennemein; half European French, half Iroquois.

From The Native American Story of the Elves, The Red Indian Fairy Book by Frances Jenkins Olcott, An Iroquois Story

The little Elves of Darkness, so says the old Iroquois Grandmother, were wise and mysterious. They dwelt under the Earth, where were deep forests and broad plains. There they kept captive all the evil things that wished to injure human beings,—the venomous snakes, the wicked spiders, and the fearful monsters. Sometimes one of these evil creatures escaped and rushed upward to the bright, pure air, and spread its poisonous breath over the Upper World. But such happenings were rare, for the Elves of Darkness were faithful and strong, and did not willingly allow the wicked beasts and reptiles to harm human beings and the growing things.

When the night was lighted by the Moon’s soft rays, and the woods of the Upper World were sweet with the odour of the Spring flowers, then the Elves of Darkness left the Under World, and creeping from their holes, held a festival in the woods. And under many a tree where the blades of grass had refused to grow, the Little People danced until rings of green sprang up under their feet. And to the festival came the Elves of Light,—among them the Tree-Elves, Flower-Elves, and Fruit-Elves. They too danced and made merry.

But when the moonlight faded away, and day began to break, then the Elves of Darkness scampered back to their holes, and returned once more to the Under World, while the Elves of Light began their daily tasks.

For in the Springtime these Little People of Light hid in sheltered places. They listened to the complaints of the seeds that lay covered in the ground, and they whispered to the Earth until the seeds burst their pods and sent their shoots up to the light. Then the little Elves wandered through the woods bidding all growing things look up to the Sun.

The Tree-Elves tended the trees, unfolding their leaves, and feeding their roots with sap from the Earth. The Flower-Elves unwrapped the baby buds, and tinted the petals of the opening flowers, and played with the Butterflies and Bees.

But the busiest of all were the Fruit-Elves. Their greatest care in the Spring was the Strawberry Plant. When the ground softened from the frost, the Fruit-Elves loosened the soil around each Strawberry root, that its shoots might push through to the light. They shaped the plant’s leaves, and turned its blossoms toward the warm rays of the Sun. They trained its runners, and helped the timid fruit to form. They painted the luscious berry, and bade it ripen. And when the first Strawberries blushed on the vines, these guardian Elves protected them from the evil insects that had escaped from the world of darkness underground.

The old Iroquois Grandmother tells how once, when the fruit first came to earth, the Evil One, Hahgwehdaetgah, stole the Strawberry Plant, and carried it to his gloomy cave, where he hid it away. And there it lay until a tiny sunbeam pierced the damp mould, and finding the little vine, carried it back to its sunny fields. And ever since then the Strawberry Plant has lived and thrived in the fields and woods. But the Fruit-Elves, fearing lest the Evil One should one day steal the vine again, watch day and night over their favourite. And when the Strawberries ripen, the Elves give the juicy, fragrant fruit to the Iroquois children as they gather the Spring flowers in the woods.

Pania Alow, Celtic elves.

From Faeries

To understand what they are, we should look at some of those found in Celtic mythology and other Celtic traditions. But, then you would discover that fairies are not just confined in Celtic traditions. Many cultures and civilizations have their own versions of fairies.

There are enough kinds of fairies to confuse anyone, because sometimes writers have associated one fairy with a different kind.

In Celtic religion, there was Celtic deities in Gaul (France and Belgium), Hispania (Spain) and Britannia (Britain) during the Roman occupation of these regions or provinces. But the situation changed when Christianity spread to the west and north. These deities that were worshipped before the conversion to Christianity were reduced to the status of fairies in Celtic mythology and folklore.

So in Ireland the gods in the Tuatha De Danann were degenerated to the roles of fairies (eg. Dagda and Lugh), people living under the dune mound or fabled islands, or even within underwater domains. Similar degeneration occurred with old deities in Wales, Scotland and other surviving pockets of Celtic kingdoms (such as Cornwall, Brittany and island of Man).

These earlier Celtic traditions of fairies, the former Irish or Welsh deities were also not fairies in the usual sense. They looked very much like human, in size and shape, except that they have special magical powers and they seemed eternally young, but they don’t have wings. The Dananns or their Welsh counterparts were usually seen as race of fair people. They can die just as mortals can, but their lives could last hundreds or even thousands of years.

The problem is that sometimes, the Christian authors have also turned them into beings serving the Devil, and that the fairies were actually demons. However this view is no longer shared, today.

Oh those summer nights


Okay, not exactly summer, but this time of year is what I live for.

The past couple of nights I have had to be out of the house for a couple of reasons.  Yesterday was an Ice Hawks meeting (I’m on the board of executives, and for those who don’t know, that’s the local hockey team), and the previous night I had to prepare the paper for delivery yesterday.  The paper has to get to the post office by about eight in the morning, so I do all of the things needed to get all the labels on each paper and make sure flyers are inserted into all the papers that the customer requests.

During the winter, this is what it might look like when I get done around 7:30 to 9:00 pm (and sometimes even later depending on the work load).

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Dark, drab, depressing.  Let’s just say, I’m not fond of that which is a winter wonderland.

Summertime is much better for me, which is why I dream of it during those long, cold winter nights.  Because last night, and Wednesday night, this is what I got to see at 9:30 in the evening.

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Outlook-20130605-00229Lots of green, quite warm, colourful sky.  The longer days mean my attitude feels a lot better.  It’s what comes with having SADs (Seasonal Affective Disorder).  I often will go into massive depression during the winter and at times it’s really hard to get motivated.  During the summer, it’s a lot easier.

I’ve often been told “You should move to a warmer climate”.  Nah, not really.  While it’d be nice to move, I really don’t want to move.  There are other ways of dealing with depression during winter, and part of that involves some extra vitamins, or even sitting under a UV lamp while I read.  It helps.

But the thing that really helps is the longer days of summer, the warm weather and the green everywhere.

Breast Cancer Ad does two things


I’m fairly certain a lot of people have seen this video.

It is about an app that helps women check themselves for breast cancer.  And it just so happens to feature a few shirtless hot guys helping to inform people about the app (ya know, if you can take your eyes off of Anthony’s abs for a second).

This ad does something else very important, and it’s caused quite a stir in the comments on Youtube for this video.  Lots of men complaining about it, but totally missing the point.

Each and every day in advertising, women are objectified in order to sell a product.  Even when the product has nothing to do with sex.  There’s a Hot Pocket ad out there that is really objectifying, and seriously, if I’m eating a Hot Pocket (first, yuck!) I’m not thinking of sex.  There’s the subtle Subway print ad with a sub being used as a phallic symbol.  At one end of the sub is a women with her mouth open.

But the above ad received a few complaints (many of those from men’s rights activities, so you can guess what kind of complaints they were about).  However, the ad itself did something that another very simple ad did quite successfully.  And both ads managed to start a conversation.

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