Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page 6
Panel 1, Left hand side, Top row
Image focuses on Michelle, she is looking into the parking lot with a heavy shadow over her face, she doesn’t look impressed.
Michelle: Merde. It’s Marvin Quinnel. Bully o’ the school.
Panel 2, Right hand side, top row
Image is of three boys, one is heavy set with curly black hair, two others a much more slight, each is wearing baseball caps of different sport teams, one of the skinny boys has a tattered jean jacket.
Marvin (with a nasty grin on his face like he’s about to start something): Well, well. If it isn’t three of my favourite people. Most of which is Yves. An’ I think I remember I owe Yves somethin’. Ain’t that right, Tyler.
Tyler (scrawny kid with wispy blond hair under an ill fitting ball cap and wearing an old Megadeath band shirt, which sports a few holes): Yeah, Marv. I think Yves tried makin’ us look like idiots.
Panel 3, Left hand side, bottom row
Image focuses on Michelle, Dominique and Yves, all have a wary look about them.
Michelle (under her breath): Didn’t have to try very hard.
Yves (coughing with a look over to Michelle): Look, Marv. We don’t want any trouble. We’re just hangin’ out an’ gonna celebrate Dom’s birthday.
Panel 4, Right hand side, bottom row
Image focuses on both groups from above, more on Marvin and his friends, Tyler and the other boy are clutching their hands together as though cracking their knuckles, while Marvin has his arms crossed over his chest, he still has the same grin.
Marvin: Well, ain’t that a great thing ta hear. ‘Cause, boy do we have a birthday present.
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