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A couple of changes to Rocket Fox


These are things that the reader will see that change slightly from Swift Fox (which will get a complete rewrite, but the main concept will remain the same).  We’ve already seen two, such as the Nighthawk’s design has changed (though, it’s allowed me to retain the Nighthawk Attack Pattern that Left-tenant Colonel Artemis Dawkins used during the Lupine Land War, which the Nighthawk was named after).  The second being Hardy’s gender change.  Hardy, of course is no longer a male, but instead a female.

Changes that the reader will see in the second act so far: a change in race to what began as a minor character.  I made Snow Fall as a shout out to tumblr user snowy (who got me hooked on Avatar: The Last Airbender), but as often times happens with minor characters that I will create off the cuff, I ended up liking the concept.  Snow Fall will appear in the second act of Flight of the Nighthawk.  She will be on board the cargo cruiser the Lionid’s Pride.  Snow Fall is no longer Pantheran.  As a matter of fact, Snow Fall will be Felinus, the other race that shares their beginnings with the Vulpine.  Snow will still be a cat like humanoid, but the race is smaller, more like a lynx or a bobcat.  Snow Fall will also at some point complain that she’s going through a heavy shed, and different coloured fur will be coming in (white, as opposed to her usual brown/grey).

It’ll also give me a chance to sort of expand on Snow’s own back story, which we’ll learn when…

…hold it.

…waitaminute!

That would be telling.

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