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The Heroic League: Third Wave


Yesterday was the second wave for this story idea, as it explored the 1990s.  The day before was the first wave as it explored the 1970s.  Welcome to the 21 Century.  Lots of new characters to go over here.  And, there’s even a couple of pictures to go with these ones.

The year is 2000

Ending the 1990s, a manhunt began for Raven Running Cloud as an Amber Alert was issued. Raven went missing after a house fire killed Miranda Running Cloud, wife of Maxwell Running Cloud. Together with a colleague at the University of Saskatchewan where Max was a professor, they developed a suit and wing harness. He dubbed himself The Hawk as he began his search for his daughter in his own way, and fought street crime and tried to get First Nations kids off the streets and into a better life.

In 2001, the world watched as terrorists crashed planes into the World Trade Centre. In Petawawa, Ontario, soldiers at the base watched the morning news in shock. It wasn’t soon after that Canada joined the United States in a large manhunt for the leader of the attacks, Osama bin Laden. Among those soldiers sent was Peter Simonson, captain in 2 Canadian Mechanized Brigade Unit, husband of Lieutenant Naomi Running Cloud. Together they have a son. Peter is ordered to join the operations in Afghanistan, while Naomi stays in Petawawa. Four months later, Peter is killed in action. Not long after, CSIS Paranormal Division approaches Naomi. She is given a suit and calls herself The Grey Kestrel.

CSIS Paranormal Division itself was an oddity. Officially, it didn’t exist. It was developed in the Second World War as a branch of a similar organization developed by the British Government. The reason why it officially didn’t exist was because only one operative within the agency was actually human; Naomi Running Cloud. The world she entered was one that was often thought to live in nightmare and fantasy. The director was a half vampire, the assistant director a Medusa, various goblins, trolls, half dragons, and other beings thought only to live in myth were among the in house agents, a few werewolves and half vampires were field agents. They even had mermaids among their ranks.

In 2002, Johnathon Tiberius Walker (known as Operative Violet Rose) sets in plan his and his unit’s escape from the underground paramilitary organization known as The Red Hand. Together with his operatives Omega Six, Crimson Luna, Indigo Beta, and Grey 6-2-6, Walker tries to deceive the deceivers during an op in Columbus, Ohio. It appears things may go wrong when Operative Pravda, a former KGB Agent named Dimitri Kovolenko, and members of a second secret organization called The Sisterhood. Filled with female assassins, the Sisterhood can lay claim to thousands of political assassinations over the last 100 years. They could, but they don’t. The Sisterhood is a ghost organization that The Red Hand has a loose alliance with. This group includes two operatives only known as Sister White and Sister Eventide. With the assistance of The Hawk and Grey Kestrel, Walker and his crew manage to part ways with The Red Hand, Dimitri Kovolenko is arrested, and Sister White breaks ties with the Sisterhood. Walker and Omega Six (also known as Malcolm Montgomery Watt) escape to the Mediterranean and are soon joined by Sister White. But not before she manages to stop an assassination attempt of Derek Stewart. Sadly, Maxine Wollcot, who has worked with the Stewart family for twenty years, is killed. Maxine’s sister, Marianne Wollcot was on hand to witness it. Marianne is also known as Sister White. (for complete details on the Columbus, Ohio incident, please see Canyons of Steel: A Modern Day Western). Kovolenko is taken to Siberia, where he is transferred to Major Lina Gregarin, a member of the Red Army who is also secretly known as the Russian hero, Soviet Wing.

In 2003, evidence comes to Max that points to a secret research facility in Northern Saskatchewan. It is suggested his daughter, Raven, is being held there. He contacts Naomi, she contacts her superior, Colonel Richard Adams. The three decide that it’s best to go in with a super team, and bring in Mariah, Tim and Tamara. What they don’t know is that the Mannekin also knows about this facility, and together with Black Bowman and recent operative, Moquette (who is, in fact, former Sisterhood agent, Sister Eventide, who killed Maxine Wollcot), are already aware of this facility. Donelda, who has finally woken from her coma, asks Melanie to look out for Derek. Melanie manages to talk to Regina, Jean Pierre and Richard, and convinces them all to come out of semi retirement to aid her. Their objective is to make sure Derek doesn’t do anything stupid. When the two groups meet, it’s Naomi and Melanie who manage to avert a superhero smack down (which was primarily instigated by Derek). The groups go into the facility, with Naomi’s group looking for Raven, and Melanie and Mannekin’s group gather information to implicate Mandrake.

Also, up to this point, Jean Pierre Turgeon discovers his daughter Dominique, has uncovered old newspaper clippings about his old heroics as Canadien. He believes it to be innocent, but it would turn out to be very different. In Windsor, Richard is pleased that his daughter Nikki has taken an interest in robotics, and feels a sense of pride when she wins a science fair award for her development of “Robbie”, a robot that is programmed to have a sensitive and emotional conversation with whomever it is talking to. Even to the point of stating to those who may interrupt the conversation “excuse me, but I am currently speaking with this person. I can talk to you once we are finished” in polite manners.

In Hamilton, Ontario, the Canadian Football League team, the Hamilton Tiger-Cats sign non import receiver Harold Mimms to a multi year contract. No one puts together the connection that once Mimms arrives in Hamilton, so to does a mysterious crime fighter known only as The Owl.

Generation 3

The Hawk: A.K.A Maxwell Running Cloud

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’3”

Weight: 215 lbs

Place of Birth: Outlook, Saskatchewan

Date of Birth: June 2, 1970

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: First Nation (Dakota)

Education: Native American history and Archaeology

Monetary Status: Middle Class

Marital status: widower

Base of Operations: Saskatoon, Saskatchewan

Grey Kestrel: A.K.A Naomi Simonson (nee Running Cloud)

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’1”

Weight: 195 lbs

Place of Birth: Silver Spring, Saskatchewan

Date of Birth: October 2, 1968

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: First Nation (Dakota)

Education: Military, political science, engineering

Monetary Status: Middle Class

Marital status: widow

Base of Operations: Petawawa, Ontario

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Operative Violet Rose: A.K.A Derringer, A.K.A Johnathon Tiberius Walker

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’0”

Weight: 200 lbs

Place of Birth: San Antonio, Texas

Date of Birth: December 15, 1954

Hair: Grey

Eyes: Hazel

Racial Background: White

Education: Career Military

Monetary Status: inapplicable

Marital status: single

Base of Operations: inapplicable

Omega Six: A.K.A Monty, A.K.A Malcolm Montgomery Watt

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’1”

Weight: 220 lbs

Place of Birth: Sydney, Australia

Date of Birth: March 5, 1965

Hair: Black

Eyes: Green

Racial Background: White

Education: Career Military

Monetary Status: inapplicable

Marital status: single

Base of Operations: inapplicable

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Sister White: A.K.A Marianne Wollcot

Physical Attributes

Height: 5’11”

Weight: 145 lbs

Place of Birth: Swansea, Wales

Date of Birth: February 27, 1963

Hair: Blonde

Eyes: Blue

Racial Background: White

Education: inapplicable

Monetary Status: inapplicable

Marital status: single

Base of Operations: inapplicable

Sister Eventide: A.K.A Moquett, A.K.A Darla Drobsky

Physical Attributes

Height: 5’10”

Weight: 145 lbs

Place of Birth: Glasgow, Scotland

Date of Birth: December 1, 1967

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: White

Education: inapplicable

Monetary Status: inapplicable

Marital status: single

Base of Operations: inapplicable

The Owl: A.K.A Harold Mimms

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’1”

Weight: 235 lbs

Place of Birth: Halifax, Nova Scotia

Date of Birth: February 1, 1979

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: Black

Education: mathematician, English literature, astrophysics

Monetary Status: Upper Middle Class

Marital status: single

Base of Operations: Hamilton, Ontario


The Heroic League: Second Wave


Last time, I detailed the first wave of the Heroic League, during the 1970s.  This time, fast forward 20 years.  A lot has happened, and this is an outline.  Unfortunately, there are no images I can put up.

The year is 1990.

By this time, Regina Morgan-Simms has retired from a life of a crime fighter, as has Donelda Stewart. Jean Pierre Turgeon has ended his costume crime fighting days as he and his wife now have a young daughter, and another soon on the way. Richard Hargrove is still Yellow Jacket, and has just finalized his third divorce after he finally admitted that he was gay. Adding to that, his young son came out saying he felt more like a girl. After a while, Richard has come to terms with this and has taken to calling his former son Nicolas, now his daughter, Nikki.

By the end of the 80s, beginning of the 90s, the world of sports changes. At least in Canada. Two individuals are given credit with helping the 1989 Saskatchewan Roughriders for winning that year’s Grey Cup; Inside Receiver Tim Andrews and Linebacker Lewis Morgan. Andrews retires from football in the mid 90s and eventually marries Tamara Wattly, a nurse in Overview, Saskatchewan. Lewis Morgan is hired shortly after his retirement from football in 1991, as chief of security for the main research building at Stewart Industries in Vancouver.

By the mid 90s, certain players begin to make themselves noticed. In a small town called Silver Spring, on the Whitecap Dakota First Nation in Saskatchewan, a woman accepts a position as doctor at the hospital. Dr. Fadra Englen, of Palestinian descent, was born in Winnipeg, Manitoba. Silver Spring is a small town, a population consisting of mostly those of Middle Eastern, Pakistani, Indian and Chinese descent. Silver Spring has the largest Muslim community in Saskatchewan. Maxwell Running Cloud, also from the Whitecap Dakota First Nation, graduates from the University of British Columbia with a degree in Native American History and Archaeology. His sister, Naomi Running Cloud, returns from her fourth tour with Canadian Armed Forces and international peace keeping missions.

Melanie Coopers is still active as Britannia, finding that the augmentation done to her has kept her aging process slowed down. She receives medical assistance from Donelda, who has focused more on science. Dr. Fadra Englen is also called in from time to time. During this time, Melanie is granted her full British citizenship back.

Toward the latter half of the 90s, a tragedy does finally occur. A bomb explodes in a Halifax hotel, killing Gerald Stewart, placing Donelda Stewart in critical condition in hospital where she’d be in a coma for a time, and also killing Elizabeth Mumford, fiance to Derek Stewart, Gerald and Donelda’s son. Derek is devastated, and the happy adult turned much much darker.

Four new heroes appear on the horizon in the 1990′s. Each is granted a special crystal that grants them incredible powers. All of these individuals are from Saskatchewan and together they are dubbed the Celestial Warriors by the media. Their real identities are secret, but due to the position of one of them, Colonel Richard Adams, the four are brought into a secret wing of CSIS dubbed The Paranormal Division.

Also in the 90s, Colonel Johnathon Tiberius Walker, United States Rangers, is given a dishonourable discharge from service. This was due to an incident from a mission that went horribly wrong while Rangers were deployed in Somalia. He is contacted by an organization called the Red Hand, and joins their ranks.

Toward the end of the decade, a rival bio-genetic company gives Stewart Industries a run of it’s money. Mandrake Bio-genetic Services comes on the scene. No one sees a coincidence between this company and those missing persons which suddenly crop up in what is described as an epidemic.

Generation 2

Emerald: A.K.A Richard Kyle Adams

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’2″

Weight: 215 lbs

Place of Birth: North Battleford, Saskatchewan

Date of Birth: April 10, 1960

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: Black

Marital status: married (to Mariah Boggotah)

Education: Military, political science

Monetary status: Middle Class

Base of Operations: CFB 15-Wing (Canadian Forces Base Moose Jaw), Moose Jaw, Saskatchewan

 Hydro: A.K.A Mariah Boggotah-Adams

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’0”

Weight: 165 lbs

Place of Birth: Johannesburg, South Africa

Date of Birth: January 20, 1960

Hair: Black

Eyes: Green

Racial Background: Black

Marital status: married (to Richard Adams)

Education: Environmental protection, water purification

Monetary status: Middle Class

Base of Operations: Moose Jaw, Saskatchewan

Prairie Fire: A.K.A Tim Andrews

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’0”

Weight: 155 lbs

Place of Birth: Invermay, Saskatchewan

Date of Birth: June 9, 1965

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: White

Marital status: married (to Tamara Wattly)

Education: Physical trainer (former inside receiver for the Saskatchewan Roughriders)

Monetary status: Middle Class

Base of Operations: Overview, Saskatchewan

Tiger Lily: A.K.A Tamara Wattly

Physical Attributes

Height: 5’9”

Weight: 135 lbs

Place of Birth: Yorkton, Saskatchewan

Date of Birth: April 2, 1965

Hair: Red

Eyes: Green

Racial Background: White

Marital status: married (to Tim Andrews)

Education: Medicine, nursing

Monetary status: Middle Class

Base of Operations: Overview, Saskatchewan

Black Bowman: A.K.A Lewis Morgan

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’2”

Weight: 225 lbs

Place of Birth: New Orleans, Louisianna

Date of Birth: September 21, 1957

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Racial Background: Black

Marital status: single

Education: Security and investigations (former linebacker for the Saskatchewan Roughriders)

Monetary status: Middle Class

Base of Operations: Regina, Saskatchewan; Vancouver, British Columbia

The Mannekin II: A.K.A Derek Stewart

Physical Attributes

Height: 6’1”

Weight: 200 lbs

Place of Birth: Vancouver, British Columbia

Hair: Blonde

Eyes: Blue

Racial Background: White

Education: Law, Commerce (self taught investigative abilities, martial arts training)

Monetary Status: Upper Class

Base of Operations: Vancouver, British Columbia


Music of superheroes


Dragonforce Operation Ground And Pound – YouTube.

Switching things up a bit from current writing (because I can do that, and I’ve hit a brick wall… again) as I think about other stories and things I’d like to write (and even make a comic book about, whether in print or a web comic).

Dragonforce has pretty much had the kind of music that I equate to one set of characters I’ve worked on, and featured here in the past.  You might know it, if you’ve read Flag On My Backpack.  It’s the series about a young woman from Montreal who becomes a costumed superhero by the name of Canadienne.  Basically wraps herself in the flag, inspired by the actions of her father during the October Crisis of 1970.  On top of that, she happens to be the lead guitarist of an indie Montreal speed metal band called Blanc Noir.  Formed while they were still in junior high school, they stuck together with the intent to make music, have fun and share their experiences together.  This lasted for a while, and during that time they added a couple of different band members.

The line up now consists of Yves Manderville (lead vocals, keyboards) and Jacqueline Manderville (second lead guitar, mandoline) both of whom are of Haitian ancestry, Michelle Villineuve (percussion) the happy goth of the group, Dominique Turgeon (first lead guitar, bagpipes) who happens to be the super hero of the group as she is the one who dresses in the flag and stops crime, and now there is Raven Running Cloud (bass, classical guitar, six string) who is originally from the Whitecap Dakota First Nation in Saskatchewan, but moved with her father to Montreal when he accepted a position to teach Native American Studies at McGill.  Raven is also the second super hero of the group, calling herself Grey Kestrel.

Dominique (Dom) Turgeon as the electrifying Canadienne.

It’s a story that I’ll definitely come back to again, and while I’d really hope that the idea was picked up in comic form, I actually don’t want either of the big two taking it up.  I’ve really be disillusioned with DC Comics and Marvel Comics as of late (more so DC than Marvel).  There is a comic company that could do a title like Flag On My Backpack some justice, though.

Archie Comics.

Dom's father, Jean Pierre Turgeon as Canadien during the 1970s.


Next year’s NaNoWriMo


This is how early I start working on an idea for next year’s NaNoWriMo.  Using the costume editor in Champions Online, I came up with a group picture and individual pictures of an idea that has been just sitting there for a while.  The characters have had different incarnations over the years, the newest being CanadARM-D.

The assembled team.

Here’s the premise:  As more and more pressures are put on the world, a billionaire industrialist decides it’s time to form a team that can handle certain situations.  Donelda Stewart, who used to be a costumed vigilante during the 1970’s and 1980’s, brings together several people, while at the same time fulfilling a contract to the Canadian Government to develop a robot that would be able to enter hostile situations with the primary goal of rescuing those injured and in need of medical attention.  Thus, CanadARM-D (last picture) was created.  Canada Armoured Reconnaissance-Rescue ‘Droid is the full name of the development and the name taken by the prototype, who acts as a member of the team Stewart brought together.

The android CanadARM-D

Stewart knew that most situations that would require immediate attention involving injured civilians would need to have a doctor on site.  She contacted Doctor Facra Englen (second from the right), a trauma surgeon and an expert in DNA sequencing.  Englen was born in Winnipeg, Manitoba to Palestinian immigrants.  She was born with a rare genetic mutation, which is what spurred her interest in genetic science.  She wanted to learn why these genetic mutations happen, and learn why they happened to her.  Fadra Englen was gifted with an odd mutation.  While possessing all of the human abilities every single person on the planet has, she also has traits of panthera tigris; The Common Tiger.  Her skin has markings of a tiger, ranging from orange to black to white, her fingernails grow like claws, her sight and hearing is improved well past normal human abilities, her musculature is far greater than most Olympic level athletes, and she is much more agile than a very athletic human.  Fadra is a practicing Muslim, taking the tenants of the Qur’an very seriously with regard to the sanctity of life.  She receives no payment from Stewart, on her own request, as she believes that this team must act as role models for others to live by.

Doctor Fadra Englen

The third and fourth team members are actually members of something else.  Dominique Turgeon, or Canadienne (third from the right), is the lead guitarist of the Montreal indie rock band, Blanc Noir.  Together with Yves and Jacqueline Manderville, Michelle Villenueve, and Raven Running Cloud (fourth from the right), they are one of the most popular rock bands on the indie circuit.  Dom has even gone public with her dual identity, which she inherited from her father.  Jean Pierre Turgeon fought against FLQ Terrorists during the October Crisis of 1970, dressed in a similar red and white uniform of Canadien.  Dom has something a little extra, however, aside from her training with Tae Kwon Do.  She has a mutant ability to achieve the speed of sound.  Dom has been clocked running at speeds of 1237 kilometers per, which is faster than the top speed of Canada’s CF18 fighter jets.  Dom has been crime fighting, and rockin’ out as a guitarist, since she was in her mid teens.  Dom was born in Laval, Quebec, and is Metis, as part of her ancestry is European French and Mohawk First Nation.

Dominique Turgeon, a.k.a. Canadienne.

The other member of Blanc Noir to be a crime fighter is Raven Running Cloud.  Raven, like Dom, comes by her crime fighting from family members.  Her father, Maxwell Running Cloud, was known as Hawk’s Scream, a moniker he took up when his wife was murdered and Raven kidnapped.  Raven, as it turned out, was taken to a secret facility and had several experiments conducted on her.  She was 8 at the time, and spent two years in the facility before Max, along with Dr. Englen, his sister Naomi Running Cloud (who was the first Grey Kestrel), and the Mannekin (the son of Donelda Stewart), could rescue her.  The experiments had two very serious effects.  First, Raven was completely blind, only able to see certain light spectrums which would allow her to “see” a person’s aura.  The other was an increased strength and physical mass.  She appears to weigh about 150 pounds, but in reality she weighs upwards of 500 or 600 pounds.  She took up her Aunt Naomi’s namesake, and began fighting crime as a sidekick of Dom’s, as her father had retired a few years earlier.  Raven was born in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, and is a member of the Whitecap Dakota First Nation.

Raven Running Cloud, a.k.a. Grey Kestrel

So this is what I’ll try and work on for next year’s NaNoWriMo.

 


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page 9


Page 9

Panel 1, Left hand side, top row

Image shows Jean Pierre walking up the stairs of the house, the “camera” is behind him, one hand is on a wooden railing as he climbs the stairs, a window is seen at the top landing.

Narrator (Jean Pierre): I went upstairs with a mix of worry and slight anger.  This was to be Dom’s birthday, and either she was acting somewhat selfish, which was something she was not often known for, or someone had done something to her.

Panel 2, Right hand side, top row

Image shows Jean Pierre at the top of the stairs, looking to his left down the hall, there is an attic doorway seen in the distance, it is open.

Narrotor (Jean Pierre): That worry changed to something else when I saw the attic door open.

Jean Pierre: Dom?  What is wrong, honey?  Why are you upset?

Panel 3, Left hand side, bottom row

Image shows Jean Pierre at the doorway of the attic, looking up the stairs.

Jean Pierre:  Dom?  Why are you up here?  What could possibly be up here?

Panel 4, Right hand side, bottom row

Image shows the same doorway, but Jean Pierre is climbing the stairs as he disappears from view.

Narrator (Jean Pierre):  I was only trying to fool myself, because I knew damn well what was in that attic.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – a small break


It was a late night at work tonight, and it’ll be an early morning tomorrow, so no update today.  I will try to get two posts for tomorrow.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script Page 8


Panel 1, Banner across top

Image shows the man and woman looking out the window as the girl helps her father with his coat (which happens to be a rather futile effort), a car is pulling up on the street outside.

Jean Pierre: Ah! There she is. The Mandervilles said they would pick her… (pauses)

Monique (concerned voice): Why is it just Regina driving? And I think I can see Dom and Michelle, but…

Panel 2, Left hand side, middle row

Through the window, they can see Dom getting out of the car and running up to the house.

Narrator (JPT): I could see the anguish in her face as she got out of the car. I could see the tears roll down her face, but they didn’t look like she’d been crying because she was sad.

Panel 3, Middle, middle row

Picture zooms in on Dom through the window, her face is contorted into a look of frustration, anger, sadness and confusion. Her hair is disheveled, the Gatsby cap gone.

Narrator (JPT): A feeling of dread came over me, as though I knew what was about to happen. As if this one event would set in motion everything to come. Because it did, in the end.

Panel 4, Right hand side, middle row

Dom bursts into the house, bawling her eyes out, her breath is heavy and she doesn’t seem to see anyone as she runs past her parents.

Jean Pierre (in a very concerned voice, arm reaching out to her): Dominique! What’s wrong?

Monique (just as concerned): Where are the others? Why is Regina driving Michelle home?

Panel 5, Left hand side, bottom row

Dom has left the kitchen, but there is the thumping of feet up a set of stairs, then another as Jean Pierre and Monique look on, each has a confused look on their faces.

Jean Pierre: I had better go see what the matter is. Wait for me here?

Monique (sighing as she looks to Jean Pierre): I’ll put things away. Just get her to calm down and find out what’s wrong.

Panel 6, Middle, bottom row

Image now has only Chloe and Monique, Chloe has retrieved her stuffed rabbit and is clutching it tightly, she looks very scared and confused.

Chloe (in a quiet voice as she looks up to Monique): No birthday?

Panel 7, Right hand side, bottom row

Monique kneels beside Chloe and pulls the small child into her arms, speaking in a soft, consoling tone, Chloe has small tears running down her cheeks.

Monique: No, little bunny, no birthday today. But maybe we will just delay it for now, hmmm?


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page 7


Page 7

Panel 1, Left hand side, top row

A large kitchen, a woman is preparing some cutlery and dishes, she is wearing a pair of comfortable slacks and a blouse, a small girl sits at the table, sort of in a protective mode over a cake that sits on top of it, the words “Happy 16, Dom!” writing in blue icing, the driveway is visible through the kitchen window.

Narrator (JPT): There are many things that I remember. The speed of my heartbeat the first night I took up the costumed uniform of Canadien, my very first kiss with Monique, Dom and Chloe’s birth. And the day Dom turned 16.

Panel 2, Middle, top row

A car pulls up into the driveway and the little girl looks up quickly and waves excitedly, the woman looks toward the window and smiles.

Chloe (waving excitedly): Papa is home!

Panel 3, Right hand side, top row

A man in the car is getting out and waves, the little girl rushes to the door as the woman places a few things on the table.

Narrator (JPT): It was the happiest moment, and one that brought about such a foreboding future. A mix of emotions that can tire even the most resolute.

Panel 4, Left hand side, middle row

The man walks into the house as the little girl run over to him, he is setting down a briefcase.

Chloe (with arms outstretched): Papa!

Jean Pierre (smiling as he holds an arm out for the girl): Ah ha! Chloe, been keeping your mother company?

Panel 5, Right hand side, middle row

The man is hugging the girl, he is bent down as she hugs his neck.

Chloe: I helped mama put the cake on the table, an’ I help watch it. An’ I never took any sneaks from it. No way!

Pierre Turgeon (laughing): Ah, that is good to hear, Chloe.

Panel 6, Left hand side, bottom row

Image shows the man and woman standing close, the man is holding the little girl in his arms, they are all smiling.

Jean Pierre: And how was your day?

Monique (a hand resting on Jean Pierre’s arm): The gallery opening was very successful. I will tell you all about it later tonight. And you?

Panel 7, Middle, bottom row

Image shows the man setting the little girl down as the woman still stands next to him.

Jean Pierre: Very uneventful. I’m waiting for a summer session of Parliament to start, however. Though, part of me hopes that the ministers will merely take a summer vacation.

Panel 8, Right hand side, bottom row

Image shows the man taking his coat off as the woman helps him. The little girl seems to hover around her parents.

Jean Pierre: Is Dom home yet?

Monique: No, not yet. She was supposed to be home about fifteen minutes ago. She should be along any moment.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page 6


Page 6

Panel 1, Left hand side, Top row

Image focuses on Michelle, she is looking into the parking lot with a heavy shadow over her face, she doesn’t look impressed.

Michelle: Merde. It’s Marvin Quinnel. Bully o’ the school.

Panel 2, Right hand side, top row

Image is of three boys, one is heavy set with curly black hair, two others a much more slight, each is wearing baseball caps of different sport teams, one of the skinny boys has a tattered jean jacket.

Marvin (with a nasty grin on his face like he’s about to start something): Well, well. If it isn’t three of my favourite people. Most of which is Yves. An’ I think I remember I owe Yves somethin’. Ain’t that right, Tyler.

Tyler (scrawny kid with wispy blond hair under an ill fitting ball cap and wearing an old Megadeath band shirt, which sports a few holes): Yeah, Marv. I think Yves tried makin’ us look like idiots.

Panel 3, Left hand side, bottom row

Image focuses on Michelle, Dominique and Yves, all have a wary look about them.

Michelle (under her breath): Didn’t have to try very hard.

Yves (coughing with a look over to Michelle): Look, Marv. We don’t want any trouble. We’re just hangin’ out an’ gonna celebrate Dom’s birthday.

Panel 4, Right hand side, bottom row

Image focuses on both groups from above, more on Marvin and his friends, Tyler and the other boy are clutching their hands together as though cracking their knuckles, while Marvin has his arms crossed over his chest, he still has the same grin.

Marvin: Well, ain’t that a great thing ta hear. ‘Cause, boy do we have a birthday present.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script Page 5


Page 5

Panel 1, Left hand side, top row

Image is overlooking a convenience store, there are two cars in the parking lot, a few people milling about, three people seen leaning against the wall near a few benches.

Narrator (JPT): I would like to say that this all began innocently enough. With some flight of fancy, and a simple desire to do good. But like most things, it did not.

Panel 2, Middle, Top row

Image zooms in on the three, one girl has ragged jeans, a tee shirt, long hair tucked up under a Gatsby cap, a backpack is on her shoulder and a skate board under one arm, the second girl is dressed in black, has short blond hair, ears, nose and eyebrow pierced and she’s wearing bangles on her wrists, ratty fishnets and black combat boots, the third is a young man, black with short hair and a small amount of facial hair, well trimmed, beige slacks and sandles, the three appear to be good friends and seem to be joking around a bit.

Dominique (in the Gatsby Cap, looking to the young man): When was Jacqueline gonna meet up with us?

Yves (the young man, leaning up against the wall next to Dominique): She had some practice for an upcomin’ track meet, so she said she was gonna be maybe an hour after class. So, we got another 20 minutes.

Panel 3, Right hand side, top row

Michelle (in black, grinning as she sits on the the back of a nearby bench, kicking her feet lightly): Hey, you seem a little anxious for somethin’, huh?

Dominique (shrugs and looking to Michelle): Well, it is my birthday today. Not everyday you turn 16.

Panel 4, Left hand side, middle row

Image shows all three, as Dominique looking toward the area of the camera as though looking back and forth between her friends.

Dominique: Okay, be honest with me. You guys are mostly just stallin’ while my parents do somethin’ to get ready, huh?

Panel 5, Middle, middle row

Image shows Michelle and Yves looking at each other and shrug, each has a Cheshire Cat grin.

Panel 6, Right hand side, middle row

Image has Michelle and Yves laughing and Dominique is looking up with what could be described as a telling sigh.

Dominique: I knew it.

Panel 7, left hand side, bottom row

Image focusing on Michelle, she is explaining something as she holds herself up on the bench backing.

Michelle: Hey, no matter what, you get to spend the day with all of us.

Panel 8, middle, bottom row

Image focusing on Yves, as he nods in agreement, we see a profile of Dominique.

Yves: Plus, we have a whole lot of gifts that need to be opened.

Dominique (blushing a bit): I thought I told you guys I don’t really care about that, just as long as we get to hang out. (pauses) Uh oh.

Panel 9, Right hand side, bottom row

Image is similar to Panel 8, but Dominique has a more serious look on her face as she is looking into the parking lot, Yves has a questioning look on his face.

Yves: What is it?

Dominique (in a quiet voice): Trouble.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page 4


Page 4

Panel, full page

Image is of Jean Pierre, full body, standing in the attic, he is holding the uniform, a little tattered and faded, newspaper clippings, photos are strewn over the floor. His expression looks very down as he stands in the attic, there are other boxes sealed up and stacked in the background.

Narrator (JPT): Somehow I knew this day would come. I knew that Dom would demand that I put on the uniform again. Become Canadien again. But that is something for young people, not me. I have my place in the world. And there are other heroes out there. But I have to make a decision, and it just may be the hardest one I have ever made.

Title splash at the bottom of the image “LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER”.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page 3


Page 3

Panel 1, Left hand side, Top half

Image shows a girl in pigtails going through boxes, there are newspaper clippings and photos spilled onto the floor, the girl is holding a red and white uniform, the leggings are crumpled onto the floor as she tries to hold it up against her, there is a red maple leaf on the chest.

Narrator (JPT): Dom has always had a curious nature. She would get into things constantly. Sometimes it was frustrating, but it also was refreshing because I could use it as a way to teach her some valuable lessons.

Panel 2, Right hand side, Top half

Images shows the man, Dom and Chloe sitting in a lighted attic, he is holding a few newspaper clippings and seems to be talking as the two girls listen closely and look at the clippings he holds.

Narrator (JPT): In time, even Chloe heard these lessons in history, as they would both hear about the adventures I would have and the time period itself.

Panel 3, Left hand side, Bottom half

Image shows four young people, all playing instruments, Dom is playing a guitar, a blond girl is on drums, a young black woman is playing another guitar and a young black man is singing.

Narrator (JPT): I made both of them promise to keep everything we talked about a secret. They did, because they both had their interests. Dom in her music…

Panel 4, Middle, Bottom half

Image shows a teenaged Chloe as she looks through fashion magazines, there are also pamphlets which seem to be from modeling schools, she is seated at a table.

Narrator (JPT): …and Chloe with her interests in modeling and fashion.

Panel 5, Right hand side, Bottom half

Image shows a head and shoulders of the man, who by now we know is Jean Pierre Turgeon, he is looking down with a saddened expression.

Narrator (JPT): Even with the promise that they would never speak of it, something told me that there would be some event that would draw it all back into the light.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page Two


Page 2

Panel 1, Banner across the top

Image is a newspaper headline, the date says October 14, 1970, the newspaper is the Montreal Gazette, in big bold letters under the date line the heading says “TRUDEAU: ‘JUST WATCH ME’”.

Narrator (JPT): The year was 1970, and this nation, this dominion of Canada was at odds with terrorists from the inside. Seeking to bring sovereignty to Quebec, they used violence of any means to spread their message. The Front de liberation du Quebec had orchestrated bombings and kidnappings, while Prime Minister Trudeau put the country under alert, as Parliament brought forward the War Measures Act.

Panel 2, Banner second row

Image is another newspaper, date is October 18, 1970, Montreal Gazette, the headline reads in bold, black letters “LAPORTE EXECUTED BY FLQ”.

Narrator (JPT): While this madness went on, there were still those of us in Quebec that wanted a unified country, that would do anything to fight for this country. So, I took a stand.

Panel 3, Banner third row

Image is a newspaper, more of the paper can be seen, there is a photo, blurry, of a man dressed in red and white with a maple leaf on his chest, he is handing over a criminal to the police, the dateline is October 19, 1970, Montreal Gazette, the headline reads in bold, black letters “HE CALLS HIMSELF CANADIEN”, underneath is a sub heading that reads “Masked avenger assists police during terrorist crisis”.

Narrator (JPT): I couldn’t just sit by while these terrorists tried to rip this country apart. Everything that I grew up believing in was being challenged by these people. To some I was a vigilante, to others, a hero. I just saw myself as someone trying to do the right thing.

Panel 4, Banner fourth row

Image is another newspaper, this time the Vancouver Sun, date line is July 14, 1976, the headline reads “Mannekin and Canadien help break up drug trafficking ring”, underneath is photo with Canadien, and a dark, hooded figure with a long cloak behind him, it is unknown if it is a man or a woman.

Narrator (JPT): I thought it would end after the crisis, but it became an adventure. I became a symbol, and for a time I lived with that. But there always would come a time when it would be time to put away childish things. But I never should have kept them hidden away. I should have destroyed them.


Flag on my Backpack: The Comic Script – Page One


Yay!  I’ve put some of this into a Word document (okay, OpenOffice file), and I’m starting to script it out the best way that can be scripted for the origin story for Canadienne, my patriotic Canadian superhero.  Here’s page one.  I’ll continue posting pages as I get them down.

Page 1

Panel 1, Left hand side, Top Row

Image of a picture, shows a family of four, mother, father, and two daughters, one is older than the other, the father wears a shirt and tie, the mother wearing sweater and slacks, one daughter is wearing a beret, has long hair, jeans and a tee shirt, the other wearing more fashionable clothing.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): Family is a very important thing. And my family is incredibly important.

Panel 2, Middle, Top Row

Image of a photo, man and a woman in a marriage procession, both smiling, people throwing confetti in the background.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): I have a wife who I love more and more each day, from the moment that we first met, to the day we began to see each other much more seriously, to our wedding day…

Panel 3, Right hand side, Top Row

Image is a photo of a man and a woman, the woman is holding a small baby, the woman is in hospital greens, laying in a bed, she appears happy, but exhausted, the man leans over, one arm around the woman, with his hand pulling back the bundle wrapping the baby, he is smiling.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): …to the day that little Dominique came into our lives. Of course, she would not be the last.

Panel 4, Left hand side, Middle Row

Image is a photo, a little girl with pigtails, she is looking into a crib with the man and woman beside her, they are smiling, inside the crib is a tiny baby, the little girl is reaching into the crib, the baby is giggling and has a grip on the little girl’s finger.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): There was also Chloe. Two beautiful daughters. Monique and I were so fortunate to have such a wonderful family. We spoiled them both so much. We did have help, mind you.

Panel 5, Middle, Middle Row

Image is a larger man, with similar features to the other man in the other photos, he is reaching down to give the little girl with pigtails a hug, she seems very excited, around them is the remnants of torn up wrapping paper, behind them is an electric guitar.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): My brother, Daniel made sure that he dotted on Dom…

Panel 6, Right hand side, Middle Row

Image is a photo of the same large man seated, a little girl, about six years old, is sitting in his lap, she is Dom’s sister, her hair is in braids, the man appears to be telling her something, he has a very conversational look on his face as though he is telling a story to her, the little girl is listening intently.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): …and just as much with Chloe.

Panel 7, Left hand side, Bottom Row

Image is of a family picnic, all five pictured, the larger man is at a barbecue, cooking burgers and hotdogs, the little girls are sitting at a picnic table, as the other man and woman are setting out plates and cutlery

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): My life was perfect. I had a career as a lawyer, Monique had her art gallery, I have a wonderful family. I could ask for nothing more.

Panel 8, Middle, Bottom Row

Image is the same as Panel 7, but faded.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): I could even relax that secrets of the past would not affect my family.

Panel 9, Right hand side, Bottom Row

Image is a black square.

Narrator (Jean Pierre Turgeon): But secrets have a tendency to catch up to you.


New character designs


New picture for character designs for Flag on my Backpack. Jean Pierre, Dom’s father, in the suit as he would appear as an 18 year old in 1970.


Final version


Made some small changes to the suit such as the boots, plus added in some small touches. For now, this is the final image for this design. Click the image to embiggen. The new series will begin sometime this summer. That's Flag on my Backpack! I can't promise if it'll be a weekly update, but it will start this summer.


Update to Flag on my Backpack


After several months of working on other projects, with the thought of doing the sequel to Flag on my Backpack, it’s come to the realization after looking through the vast 71 pages of material (not nearly as much as Black Mask & Pale Rider, but close to Canyons of Steel) it feels that there needs to be more.  It needs to be revisited.  While doing the entire story through first person describing memories and stories, I’m thinking of changing and expanding it, so it’s completely in third person, with the beginning point on Dominique’s 16th birthday, then flashing back to September, 1970.

Part of this complete revisiting of the “origin story” is because while Flag is supposed to be about Canadian identity and Canadian pride, it will also be filled with pop culture and history.  There’s certain things I want to describe, from major character development, right down to the fact that Dom has her own personal iPod and track list she listens to while taking down bad guys.  Whereas in the 1970′s her father, Jean Pierre, used a Realistic (that’s the brand name of an old transistor radio sold through Radio Shack) to keep track of news and also search out any criminals.

And, you never know, I may even try to script it so it can be done as a comic book.  I’ve even taken a stab at redesigning Dom’s costume.  Most likely I’ll have to do a redesign of Jean Pierre’s as well, as the first major arc will be through a flashback that details his motivation to put on a costume and fight crime as Canadien.  For those really, really curious, the new look is to the left.  At least that’s the initial design.

At present, I won’t give myself the July 1st deadline to try and get this going, but I do hope to have some parts of it up over the summer months (I totally dream of sitting in a lawn chair, frosty beverage close by, and writing away in a notebook or typing away on my laptop).

I also have to admit, I’m totally liking the redesign over past ideas I’ve had for a suit for Canadienne.


Banned Books Week


This was originally posted on my tumblr blog, but bears repeating here.

I did not know this, but this happens to be Banned Books Week.

Anyone who happens to read this tumblr or my blog at wordpress knows I’m a big, huge fan of books.  Books are like comfort food for me.  They are a precious commodity that should be held in high regard.  They spark the imagination and teach us valuable lessons.  It’s sad to think that there are books that are challenged, and people who wish to see them banned.

Harry Potter book series

Image by bibicall via Flickr

The American Library Association has a list of banned books.  Many of them are classics.  Catcher in the Rye, The Great Gatsby, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Black Beauty, Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein, Of Mice and Men, Alice in Wonderland and 1984 just to name a few are challenged in many districts across the United States as unacceptable reading.  Also, many new books are on the banned list, such as J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series.  It’s kind of disheartening, as someone who is preparing to release my first published book, that there are people in the world who would wish to deny someone the right to read.

My first book, being The Adventures of Black Mask & Pale Rider, does have elements that could become targets.  One of the characters is a lesbian (though, it is only referenced in passing and no big deal is made of it).  It’s also a book about six guns and sorcery.  That last part might get it frowned at.  Sorcery, or wizardry, got the Harry Potter series on the banned book list.  My hope with this first book is to entertain, nothing more.  I only shudder to think if ever I manage to get Flag on my Backpack published in graphic novel form (as I hope to do), what will be thought of with that.  It’s a lot more politically charged than Black Mask & Pale Rider.

My one hope is that people will take the time to look over the list of books at the American Library Association and read just one or two from the list this week.  Heck, if you read more, great.  These books are precious and should not be overlooked.  Whether you agree or disagree with the content is not the important issue.  The important issue is all books should be given a chance.  All books should be open to the public.

Give a book a chance.


Flag on my Backpack: Part Eighteen


Unimportant

The five of them lounged on the couch in the Turgeon rec-room as the television just added to some background noise. None of them realized it was on a news program. Curled up in the big easy chair of the room was Chloe, listening to the conversation. Mostly whenever Yves and Able spoke up. She had a crush on Yves since she was 13, and now with Able frequenting their home, he was just as nice to look at.

They discussed song lyrics and musical notations as every now and then, either Dom would strum a series of chords on her guitar, or Michelle would set a beat, and even Able would produce something on a recorder he had on hand. The only time they stopped their creative session was when Monika came into the rec-room with a fresh supply of beverages. Even Jean Pierre came down to see how they all were doing, and for a moment, the five took a break from their writing as they all shared in a few laughs.

But their attention turned toward the television as a news report came on.

“Vancouver City Police, along with RCMP, continue the search today for a suspected serial killer known only by the name Trinity,” the news anchor announced in his most deadpan voice. “With more in this report, here’s Shirley Melville.”

The scene switched to a warehouse along the docks in Vancouver, as police cars surrounded the place. It was obvious this was after the discovery of one of the most recent victims. “Police say they have no further leads in this case, but have disclosed that they believe this latest rash of murders does have a connection with another on going investigation. Lieutenant Christa Rayne with the RCMP Tactical Division says she believes strongly that Trinity is being pursued by the Mannekin.”

The image of a professional looking woman with dark red hair cut into a short bob filled the screen. “In each of the six murders witnesses have informed police that two individuals were seen fighting. We have enough witness evidence that points to one of the combatants being Trinity, while the other is Mannekin. In three of the cases it was observed that two other individuals gave aid to one of the combatants, which we can safely assume would be Mannekin’s associates known as Black Bowman and Moquette.”

“In each of the six cases thus far,” Shirley Meliville continued as the scene switched to the reporter speaking into a microphone in front of an investigation scene. “Police have admitted there is no connection between the victims. The public has already made a call to have police move faster in catching the suspect, although no evidence as to his real identity has been forthcoming. Reporting from Richmond, British Columbia, I’m Shirley Melville, CBC News.”

No one spoke a word for a while after the report finished, as they let the words from the reporter sink in. Yves and Michelle both looked to Dom, knowing full well that figures like the Mannekin made her own work in the community difficult as Canadiens. Yves openly sighed as he sat back on the couch. “I’m just glad things like dat do not happen here.”

“Oh, they do, Yves,” Jean Pierre spoke up in a quiet and calm voice. “Not now, but they have in the past. I’m just glad dat monsters like dis Trinity and Mannekin are far, far away from here.”

*****

Eleanor Wollcott delicately pushed her glasses up on her nose as she read the text on her cellphone, waiting for the lift to come to a stop. She had to interrupt her usual duties as personal secretary for Derrik Stewart, the CEO of the multinational bio-genetic conglomerate known as Stewart Industries. Worry grew on her face which usually held very stoic features. Not company business, to be certain. The day to day activities of Derrik Stewart and the business of Stewart Industries went according to clockwork. It was Derrik Stewart’s more nocturnal habits that usually worried her. Those she could read between the lines of code that were in the message.

As the doors to the lift opened, she was greeted by two others who were familiar with this routine. Eleanor could read the worry in both of their faces as she began to walk with them. Lewis Morgan, chief of security for Stewart Industries’ Vancouver operations. A former linebacker with the Saskatchewan Roughriders, this New Orleans native was the first to discover Derrik’s secret obsession. Darla Drobsky, Derrik’s personal body guard, not that he really needed one. What the public didn’t know about Darla’s past was kept a very close secret. Former assassin with a secret organization called the Sisterhood. Female assassins, hired by the highest bidder, and very, very good at their jobs. For Darla to turn her back on them would have meant death to many, but under the protective umbrella of Stewart Industries, she was afforded safety.

Like Eleanor, Lewis and Darla both knew of Derrik’s other interests, but unlike Elanor, they had a personal stake in the activities as they would often join Derrik. A call from Derrik of such importance usually meant they would have to once again move to the offensive against some threat. Elanor had her suspicions as to just whom that would be.

The three quietly entered the office of Derrik Stewart, which overlooked the Vancouver harbour, catching a glimpse of the mountains. Derrik stood gazing out the windows, a cup of coffee in one hand, as Lewis closed and locked the door. “I believe it is safe to say, Mr. Stewart that we all received your text,” Elanor announced in her crisp British accent as she removed her glasses. She was an attractive woman, who lost some of the schoolmarm charm when she removed her spectacles.

“Do we have any operations that need to be inspected in the area?” Derrik announced without awaiting small talk.

“There are two,” Elanor replied as she flipped open a notebook and skimmed the contents. “A printing company that publishes agricultural pamphlets and a manufacturing company that deals with government defence contracts.”

“Good,” Derrik said as he finally turned to face them, setting his coffee cup down on the large oak desk. “Set up an appointment to see each of them over the course of the next week.” He then looked to Darla and Lewis. “Make sure that our equipment is loaded and ready to go. I have received word from a trusted contact that Trinity has moved his point of interest from Vancouver.” He slid his hands into his pockets as he spoke, and though he sounded like the staunch businessman he always was seen as in the public light, all three knew that something deeper and darker affected him. Like a shadow creeping across his soul. “Get some sleep. We’ll be taking the private jet in the morning, and should land at two o’clock local time in Montreal.”

Next Summer

Flag on my Backpack: Shadows Fall


Flag on my Backpack: Part Seventeen (French version)


Doux Abandon

L’homme brouillés à travers le parc, en cours d’exécution dans les arbres, les buissons et en renversant des piétons innocents. Toujours, à seulement quelques pas derrière, la jeune femme en uniforme rouge et blanc; Canadiens. Son désespoir pour échapper a été coûteuse, car il a gardé son accent sur son poursuivant et non pas ce qui était en face de lui. Il n’a pas entendu la police jusqu’à ce qu’il ait presque couru en eux. Il s’arrêta, la recherche d’une évasion, une décision coûteuse, au mieux. Une partie de lui devrait l’aborder à venir.

Dom a précipité en claquant son épaule dans le bas du dos comme il déplacé de gauche à droite, en regardant autour désespérément. Soudain, sa concentration se détourna de s’échapper de se battre. Dom avait pris au piège comme un animal, et comme n’importe quel animal acculé, lorsque peur et désespérés, ils s’adressent généralement à celui qui les piège. Contrairement à un animal, cet homme a dû être capturé. Il avait déjà attaqué plusieurs femmes sur le campus de McGill, cette dernière tentative a montré son désespoir.

Canadiens ne se souciait pas s’il y avait un certain déséquilibre mental chez l’homme, ne se souciait pas s’il avait besoin de conseils, elle savait seulement qu’il devait être arrêté. Elle ferait tout ce qui était en son pouvoir pour le retenir afin qu’il n’ait pas de mal à personne chaque fois. D’ailleurs, elle avait de sauvegarde. La police a fait irruption à travers les buissons, autour de l’homme comme Dom le tenait ferme sur le sol. Il a continué à lutter, mais lentement arrêté que les officiers fermé un cercle autour de lui.

“Alright, Canadiens,” l’un des officiers a annoncé. “Nous le tenons.”

Dom laisser aller, ne pas lui donner une balle dans la tête qu’elle a si désespérément voulu. Elle vient de les laisser l’emmener, même si une rage lente construite à l’intérieur d’elle. Elle ne savait pas les détails de chaque attaque de cet homme peut avoir commis, tout ce qu’elle savait, elle a été empêché une jeune fille de devenir une statistique négative. Elle regarda autour du parc pour un moment que la police l’homme transporté loin. Quelques officiers restés sur place pour calmer et rassurer tout le monde, y compris Fréchette et Kowalsky. Avis Dom mesure, avec la jeune fille suspendue juste derrière lui. Deux d’entre eux auraient de faire une déclaration à un moment donné.

Elle se dirigea vers eux, en notant les regarder dans les yeux de Able. Il y avait un mélange de crainte et de respect, avec une nuance de colère qui était assis à l’arrière quelque part. Elle ne pouvait supposer qu’il était destiné à l’homme qui avait tenté sans succès de faire du mal à son ami. La jeune fille aux cheveux roses était loin derrière Able, furtivement de temps en temps pour regarder les faits et gestes.

“Vous êtes tous deux vont devoir faire une déclaration, vous le savez,” Dom a annoncé qu’elle s’approchait d’eux. La jeune fille aux cheveux roses se recula un peu. “Tout va bein. Voir cet officier il ya,” dit-elle en lui montrant une femme officier, Jocette Frechette. La jeune fille hocha lentement la tête. “C’est Frechette agent. Vous devriez aller lui parler, et elle et son partenaire peut vous rentrez chez vous. Okay?”

La jeune fille hésita un peu, puis se mit à marcher vers Frechette. Elle s’arrêta un moment, puis se retourna pour les Canadiens. “Mon nom est Claire.” Dom hocha la tête comme elle a forcé un petit sourire. La ruée vers l’adoption rapide de la baisse et la colère qui s’était accumulée en elle était toujours là, donc c’était un peu d’effort pour essayer de transmettre un visage amical. Claire essaya de sourire en retour, avant qu’elle ne marcha lentement vers Frechette.

“Vous allez avoir à parler à la police ainsi, vous savez,” dit Dom Able en regardant Claire. Elle se tourna vers le jeune homme, et a pris note des petits sourire sur son visage. “Qu’est-ce? Pourquoi souriez-vous pour?”

“Tu m’as appelé par mon nom, Luv,” Able dit-il en a un peu un gros peu et parlait à voix basse. Dom soupira et ferma les yeux quand elle comprit ce qui allait arriver. Elle se sentait comme un idiot. “Plus je vous ai vu à quelques pâtés de retour, qui s’occupent de ces deux comme ils descendirent dans la rue. Vous devez avoir éludé hors de la vue parce que je ne t’ai jamais vu par la suite. Eh bien, ne t’ai jamais vu jusqu’à ce que quelqu’un vous l’avez souligné sur un toit.”

Dom se détendit un peu, mais a estimé qu’elle avait besoin d’élever ses défenses. Elle ne veut pas être négligée. La connaissance de sa double vie pourrait être un fardeau pour Able. Mais d’autre part, elle avait mentionné qu’il lui potes du groupe, et capable allait être une partie de cette vie si il méritait de connaître. “J’allais dire quelque chose, vous savez. À t’night pratique. Mais allait travailler à la hauteur. Yves, Jacqueline et Michelle savons tous.”

“Ils savent? Tu veux dire, ils sont cool avec ça?” Able demandé avec une certaine curiosité. Dom seulement hoché la tête en réponse. “Quelqu’un d’autre?”

“Frechette,” dit-elle, comme elle a souligné l’officier de parler à Claire. “Et Kowalsky. Mes parents. Et ma sœur, Chloé.”

“Attendez! Vous avez une sœur?”

“Oui, elle rentre à la maison de Paris …” Dom s’arrêta brusquement, comme elle a commencé à se rappeler tous les événements de la journée qu’elle avait prévu. Dont l’un était d’obtenir un cadeau pour sa sœur, un cadeau bienvenue à la maison. “Merde! J’ai presque oublié! Je dois prendre ce don, j’ai besoin d’obtenir mes livres de la librairie du campus, ont besoin pour obtenir mon sac à dos!”

“Easy, Dom. Easy,” Able répondu avec un petit rire rassurant. “Je vais vous donner mon patron, Etienne un appel et demander l’après-midi au large. J’ai été tirant des heures supplémentaires au travail de sorte qu’il ne devrait pas l’esprit. De plus, avec cette aventure, je vais avoir besoin de temps pour se calmer.”

“Calmez-vous?” Dom a dit que elle a étudié le jeune homme. “Vous avez l’air plus calme moi donc. Et c’est votre ami qui a été attaqué.”

“J’ai incroyable force intérieure,” at-il répondu avec un sourire, puis offrit son bras à Dom. “Venez fille, ton char attend. Eh bien, peut-être pas char. C’est un rouillé ’76 Toyota Celica.”

Dom rire légèrement, comme elle lui prit le bras. “Va avoir besoin de travailler sur ce point, vous savez.”

*****

Chloé était assis dans le salon de la maison de sa famille et vu le monde passer. Déjà, elle avait disparu de Paris. Montréal était si fade en comparaison. Elle a dû se l’avouer, elle a fait une erreur, mais peut-être, juste peut-être, si elle a travaillé assez dur ici, à Montréal, elle pourrait obtenir une reconnaissance de revenir. Il peut arriver. Au moins, elle aimait passer l’après-midi avec ses parents. Alors que Jean-Pierre et Monika a essayé d’inculquer une éthique de travail dans les deux de leurs filles, il ya eu des moments où Jean-Pierre serait de les gâter. Ils étaient à lui, après tout, et il se sentait qu’ils méritaient de vivre une vie pleine de remplissage.

Chloé pouvait sentir l’odeur provenant de la cuisine. Sa mère la cuisine, la seule chose lui manquait alors qu’elle était à Paris. Elle n’avait jamais parlé à ses parents qu’elle a manqué que par-dessus tout. Peut-être qu’elle aurait pour commencer. Elle allait devoir s’habituer à des choses à Montréal. La vie serait différente.

La première différence, elle a été remarqué le véhicule qui montait en face de leur maison. Un seau de rouille réel, mais conservait encore les lignes de sa nature la fois sportive. Un garçon roux sont sortis du siège du conducteur, ce qui portait Chloé serait en droit d’attendre d’un des amis de Dom. Sauf le kilt est un peu un choc. Toutefois, ses soupçons furent bientôt confirmées comme Dom sont sortis du côté passager. Cela ne fait rien pour mettre un terme à sa confusion, cependant. Chloé avait connu Dom toute sa vie. Dix-sept ans. Elle avait toujours connu une chose Dom.

Chloé se leva du canapé et se promenait devant la porte, sortir sur le perron et d’attendre que Dom pour finir de parler à son amie. Elle écoutait la conversation des deux petits avaient, bits de capture et des morceaux de lui.

“Show ce soir, pour la pratique?” Dom a dit d’une voix douce.

“Ne serait-il manquer pour rien au monde, Luv,” répondit le jeune homme. Peu de temps après, le jeune homme retourna à sa voiture et partit. Pas tranquillement soit, Chloé supposer que le seau de rouille sans doute besoin d’un nouveau silencieux.

Dom resta un instant en voyant la voiture lecteur hors tension, puis se tourna vers sa maison, contenu dans ses pensées.

“Je suis confus,” Chloé a finalement annoncé, Dom saisissante avec son annonce soudaine. “J’ai toujours eu l’impression que vous avez aimé les filles.” Chloe sourit gaiement, comme elle regardait Dom et attendait une réponse.

Dom retint son souffle, comme elle regardait Chloé pour un moment. “Je ne savais pas que tu étais là, sœur,” at-elle souffla et déplacé son sac à dos. “Quant à ce que vous demandez, Michelle et moi dupe un peu, mais nous avons réalisé que nous venons amis. Et c’est ainsi que nous l’aimons. D’ailleurs, ce que les entreprises de quiconque est-il que je date?”

“Cela a du sens venant de vous,” répondit Chloé avec son accent parisien forcé.

Dom déplacé sur les marches et regarda à Chloé, son expression change de choc pour une apparence beaucoup plus rassurant. “Alors, comment était le vol de retour?”

“C’était bien,” répondit Chloé une petite voix en regardant le sol. “Ne dites pas à papa ou maman, mais j’ai pleuré quand je suis les nouvelles. J’ai en quelque sorte vissé vers le haut.”

Dom hocha la tête avec un sourire, en notant que Chloé a commencé à transférer son accent retour à la normale. “J’ai quelque chose pour vous. Figure vous allez avoir besoin de cela, alors je l’ai ramassé pour vous.” Dom atteint dans son sac à dos et en tira une boîte de connaître blanc avec un logo Apple gris clair à ce sujet. “Je t’ai un iPhone. Il a un peu d’applications que j’ai téléchargé, plus je mets de la musique sur elle. Ajout de mon téléphone portable, et papa à votre carnet d’adresses.” Elle a remis la boîte de Chloé, qui a pris soin avec un silence stupéfait.

Chloé s’est tourné vers la boîte, puis à sa sœur. “Merci, Dom.” Elle a souri et a donné une accolade Dom.

“Hé, on peut se battre et tout ça,” Dom a répondu comme elle est retournée aux hug. “Mais à la fin, je vais regarder pour ma soeur.” Elle tapota Chloe sur le dos et tiré vers l’arrière un peu, en ajoutant avec un sourire. “Nous ferions mieux de pénétrer à l’intérieur avant que certains de nos voisins de nous voir tous les cours civiles.”


Flag on my Backpack: Part Seventeen


Sweet Surrender

The man scrambled through the park, running into trees, bushes and knocking over unsuspecting pedestrians. Always, only a few steps behind, the young woman in the red and white uniform; Canadiens. His desperation for escape was a costly one, as he kept his focus on his pursuer and not what was in front of him. He didn’t hear the police until he’d almost run into them. He stopped, searching for an escape, a costly decision at best. Part of him expected the upcoming tackle.

Dom rushed him, slamming her shoulder into the small of his back as he shifted from side to side, looking around desperately. Suddenly his concentration turned from escape to fight. Dom had trapped him like an animal, and like any animal cornered, when scared and desperate they usually turn on the one who trapped them. Unlike an animal, this man had to be captured. He’d already attacked several women on the McGill campus, this latest attempt showed his desperation.

Canadiens didn’t care if there was some mental imbalance in the man, didn’t care if he needed counselling, she only knew that he had to be stopped. She would do whatever was in her power to hold him fast so he wouldn’t hurt anyone every again. Besides, she had backup. The police broke through the bushes, surrounding the man as Dom held him firm to the ground. He continued to struggle, but slowly stopped as the officers closed a circle around him.

“Alright, Canadiens,” one of the officers announced. “We’ve got him.”

Dom let go, didn’t give him one shot to the head that she so desperately wanted to. She just let them take him away, even though a slow rage built up inside of her. She didn’t know the details of each attack this man may have committed, all she knew was she prevented a girl from becoming a negative statistic. She looked around the park for a moment as police hauled the man away. A few officers stayed behind to calm and reassure everyone, including Frechette and Kowalsky. Dom notice Able, with the young girl hanging right behind him. Both of them would have to give a statement at some point.

She walked over to them, noting the look in Able’s eyes. There was a mix of awe and respect, with a tinge of anger that sat in the back somewhere. She could only assume that it was meant for the man who had unsuccessfully tried to hurt his friend. The girl with the pink hair stood close behind Able, peeking out from time to time to watch the goings on.

“You two are gonna ‘ave to give a statement, you know,” Dom announced as she approached them. The girl in the pink hair shrank back a bit. “It’s okay. See dat officer dere?” she said as she pointed to a female officer, Jocette Frechette. The girl nodded slowly. “Dat is Officer Frechette. You should go talk to her, an’ she an’ her partner can get you home. Okay?”

The girl hesitated a bit, then began to walk toward Frechette. She stopped a moment, then looked back to Canadiens. “My name’s Claire.” Dom nodded as she forced a small smile. The rush from the fast take down and the anger that had built up in her was still there, so it was a bit of an effort to try to convey a friendly face. Claire tried to smile in return before she slowly walked over to Frechette.

“You gonna ‘ave to talk to de police as well, you know,” Dom said to Able as she watched Claire. She turned to look to the young man, and took note of the small smirk on his face. “What? What you smilin’ for?”

“Ye called me by me name, luv,” Able said as he inched a bit close and spoke in a low voice. Dom sighed and closed her eyes as she realized what was coming. She felt like an idiot. “Plus I saw ye a few blocks back, lookin’ after these two as they went down the street. Ye musta ducked outta sight ’cause I never saw ye again after that. Well, never saw ye ’til someone pointed ye out on a rooftop.”

Dom relaxed a little bit, but felt that she needed to bring up her defences. She didn’t mean to be so sloppy. The knowledge of her dual life could be a burden to Able. But on the other hand, she’d mentioned it to her band mates, and Able was going to be a part of that life so he deserved to know. “I was gonna say somet’ing, you know. At practise t’night. But was gonna work up to it. Yves, Jacqueline an’ Michelle all know.”

“They know? Ye mean, they’re cool with it?” Able asked with some curiosity. Dom only nodded in reply. “Anybody else?”

“Frechette,” she said as she pointed out the officer talking to Claire. “An’ Kowalsky. My parents. An’ my sister, Chloe.”

“Wait! Ye’ve got a sister?”

“Oui, she’s comin’ ‘ome from Paris…” Dom stopped abruptly as she began to remember all the day’s events that she had planned. One of which was to get a gift for her sister, a welcome home present. “Merde! I almost forgot! I gotta pick up dat gift, I need to get my books from de campus book store, need to get my backpack!”

“Easy, Dom. Easy,” Able replied with a reassuring chuckle. “I’ll give me boss, Etienne a call an’ ask fer the afternoon off. I’ve been pullin’ some overtime at work so he should mind. Plus, with this adventure, I’ll need time to calm down.”

“Calm down?” Dom said as she studied the young man. “You look more calm den me. An’ it were yer friend who were attacked.”

“I have incredible inner fortitude,” he responded with a bright smile and then offered his arm to Dom. “Come lass, yer chariot awaits. Well, maybe not chariot. It’s a rusted out ’76 Toyota Celica.”

Dom chuckled lightly as she took his arm. “Gonna ‘ave to work on dat, you know.”

*****

Chloe sat in the living room of her family’s home and watched the world go by. Already she was missing Paris. Montreal was so bland in comparison. She had to admit to herself, she did make a mistake, but maybe, just maybe, if she worked hard enough here in Montreal she could get recognition to go back. It might happen. At least she enjoyed spending the afternoon with her parents. While Jean Pierre and Monika did try to instill a hard work ethic in both their daughters, there were times that Jean Pierre would spoil them. They were his, after all, and he felt they deserved to live a full-filling life.

Chloe could smell the aroma coming from the kitchen. Her mother’s cooking, the one thing she missed while she was in Paris. She’d never mentioned to her parents that she missed that above all else. Maybe she’d have to start. She was going to have to get used to things in Montreal. Life would be different here.

The first difference she noticed was the vehicle that drove up in front of their home. A real rust bucket, but still retained lines of its once sporty nature. A red headed boy climbed out of the driver’s seat, wearing what Chloe would come to expect of one of Dom’s friends. Except the kilt was a bit of a shock. However, her suspicions were soon confirmed as Dom climbed out of the passenger side. This did not do anything to halt her confusion, however. Chloe had known Dom for her entire life. Seventeen years. She’d always known one thing about Dom.

Chloe got up from the couch and walked around to the front door, stepping out onto the porch and waiting for Dom to finish talking to her friend. She listened to the small conversation the two had, catching bits and pieces of it.

“Show up for the practise t’night?” Dom said in a soft voice.

“Wouldn’t miss it fer the world, luv,” the young man replied. Soon after, the young man went back to his car and drove off. Not quietly either, Chloe assumed that the rust bucket probably needed a new muffler.

Dom stood for a moment as she watched the car drive off, then turned to her home, content in her thoughts.

“So I am confused,” Chloe finally announced, startling Dom with her sudden announcement. “I always was under zhe impression zhat you liked girls.” Chloe smiled cheerily as she watched Dom and waited for an answer.

Dom caught her breath as she stared at Chloe for a moment. “Didn’t know you were dere, sis,” she huffed and shifted her backpack. “As for what you ask, Michelle an’ me fooled around a bit, but we realize dat we just friends. An’ dat’s de way we like it. Beside, what business of anyone’s is it who I date?”

“Zhat makes sense coming from you,” Chloe replied with her forced Parisian accent.

Dom moved onto the steps and looked to Chloe, her expression changing from shock to a much more comforting appearance. “So, how was de flight back?”

“It was alright,” Chloe replied in a small voice as she looked to the ground. “Don’ tell papa or mama, but I cried when I got the news. I kinda screwed up.”

Dom nodded with a smile, noting that Chloe had started to shift her accent back to normal. “I got somet’ing for you. Figure you gonna need dis, so I picked it up for you.” Dom reached into her backpack and pulled out a familiar white box with a light grey Apple logo on it. “I got you an iPhone. It’s got a few apps I downloaded, plus I put some music on it. Added my cellphone, an’ papa’s to your address book.” She handed Chloe the box, who took it carefully with a stunned silence.

Chloe looked to the box, then up to her sister. “T’ank you, Dom.” She smiled and gave Dom a hug.

“Hey, we may fight an’ stuff,” Dom replied as she returned the hug. “But in the end, I’m gonna look out for my sister.” She patted Chloe on the back and pulled back just a bit, adding with a grin. “We better get inside b’fore some o’ our neighbours see us bein’ all civil.”


Flag on my Backpack: Part Sixteen (French version)


L’homme libre à Paris

Jean Pierre regarda sa montre alors qu’il se tenait dans le terminal principal de l’aéroport Pierre Elliot Trudeau International. Il était en avance pour l’arrivée de Paris, en France, mais il voulait s’assurer qu’il avait beaucoup de temps, et il ne veut pas que sa fille cadette de s’inquiéter. Heureusement, son bureau lui a donné le temps de ramasser Chloé, que Monika avait un engagement galerie qu’elle ne pouvait pas sortir. Il avait été huit mois que Chloé rentre en France pour ses études secondaires et des classes pour une carrière espoir de modélisation. Mais, cette année il y avait une petite quantité de controverse. Chloé a été demandé de ne pas rentrer à cause d’un incident. Aucune preuve n’a été établie, mais il y avait assez de pointer du doigt en direction de Chloé que les administrateurs de l’école a jugé nécessaire de demander à Jean-Pierre et Monika ne pas envoyer de Chloé de retour à Paris.

Tout cela était dû à un secret bien gardé, encore plus que les activités bien gardé de Dominique en tant que Canadiens. Chloé avait un don, mais un don que, parfois, elle a eu des ennuis. Elle pourrait canal naturel schémas électriques par elle-même. Il y avait plusieurs jours Jean-Pierre pouvait se rappeler où Dominique et Chloé se lancer dans une guerre de choc. Chloé se frotter légèrement ses pieds sur le sol et touche l’épaule de sa sœur, qui serait un bon courant électrique à travers Dominique. Qui aurait bien sûr, des mesures de rétorsion. Une telle action a été suspectée dans la controverse à Paris, bien que personne ne pouvait le prouver. Jean Pierre savait, cependant, et il savait aussi que Chloé n’a pas délibérément souhaite de mal à personne. Il a été son aspect de plaisir.

Sa pensée revint à la présenter comme il a repéré un bien habillé, jeune femme marchant dans le terminal. Chloé est à l’opposé complet de Dominique. Lorsque Dominique a été heureux avec ses jeans déchirés et un tee-shirt propre, Chloé nécessaire bien pressé, vêtements de marque. Dominique avait un nid de rat pour les cheveux à la fois, tandis que Chloé ne voulait pas descendre au petit déjeuner sans se brosser les siens.

Jean Pierre sourit comme Chloé l’ai vu. Elle agitait comme il se dirigea vers elle, lui donner un gros câlin. “Ah ça fait si longtemps, Chloé,” dit-il avec un sourire.

“Oui, papa,” Chloé a répondu avec un sourire à son retour l’étreinte.

“Le vol a été bien?” Demanda-t-il la conduira à travers le terminal.

“C’était bien. J’ai eu un siège côté fenêtre, ainsi je pourrais voir quand nous étions à venir à Montréal,” dit-elle avec un accent un peu forcé.

Jean Pierre secoua la tête et sourit. Chloé était encore en train de se faire son parisienne. “Vous savez, vous n’avez pas à parler comme ça, hein.”

“Je sais,” répondit Chloé avec un petit soupir. “Mais j’ai toujours eu taquine quand je parle. Ils rient et disent ‘stupide québécois.’ Alors, j’essaie de parler comme eux, parfois.”

“Vous savez pourquoi ils disent cela?” Jean-Pierre a demandé que ils ont cessé de recueillir des bagages de Chloé. Chloé hocha la tête alors qu’elle attendait la réponse. “Parce qu’ils sont jaloux.” Chloe roulait des yeux comme Jean Pierre rire à la légère. “Viens. Nous rejoindre votre mère pour le déjeuner. Elle a une première galerie d’aujourd’hui.”

“Est-ce que Dom être à midi?” Chloé a demandé avec une certaine curiosité.

“Oh, elle avait des choses à prendre soin d’aujourd’hui,” Jean-Pierre répondit avec un haussement d’épaules de petite taille. “C’est son jour de congé du travail, de sorte qu’elle pourrait ne pas apparaître jusqu’à ce soir souper. Mais elle est elle-même de maintien de la détresse.”

*****

Le sac à dos a été caché sur un toit et Dominique sprinté sur les toits, en gardant un œil sur la rue ci-dessous. Ils n’avaient pas eu trop loin, elle pouvait encore voir la fille aux cheveux roses. Mais ils se dirigeaient vers un parc, une avec de petits arbres et des haies soigneusement taillées et bloquerait vue de Dominique si elle essayait d’utiliser sa ligne de swing. «Merde, murmurait-elle, comme elle est tombée à la rue. Elle aurait à suivre de près à pied, je l’espère attraper l’homme à l’habit gris essaient de faire quelque chose.

Elle a sprinté dans les buissons, en regardant les deux arpenté les allées du parc. La jeune fille aux cheveux roses se dirigeait dans une zone ombragée du parc, l’homme à l’habit gris se refermait sur elle. Il faisait grand jour, mais pas beaucoup ont été dans le parc lui-même. Dominique baissa derrière quelques-uns des arbres, comme elle a suivi de près, en gardant les yeux sur la paire. Dans sa poche de veste, elle se sentait vibrer téléphone cellulaire, une distraction mineure, mais qui n’a pas force de lui faire perdre les deux, elle a suivi.

“Bonjour,” dit-elle avec un murmure dans la cellule où elle a suivi à travers les arbres le long.

“Dom,” répondit la voix à l’autre bout. Il a été Frechette. “Quel est le statut?”

“Vous savez que le parc juste à côté du bâtiment d’enseignement sur le campus de McGill?” Dit-elle dans un murmure. Elle a entendu Frechette reconnaître positivement. “Ils sont passés par là, entrer dans les sentiers boisés lourds.”

“Stick avec eux. S’il consent une avance, il briser un «essayer de lui faire exécuter du Nord. Nous mettons en place un piège là-bas,” a expliqué Fréchette rapidement.

“Alright,” Dom a répondu rapidement. “Avez-aller. Il se rapproche.” Elle raccrocha et se glissa le téléphone portable dans sa poche, comme elle sont allées plus vite à travers les arbres. Elle a observé que la jeune fille aux cheveux roses arrêté sur le chemin. Elle était à la recherche sur l’un des CD de nouveau, mais cette fois, elle prenait un lecteur de disque portatif. Dom n’avait pas vu l’un de ceux pour toujours, mais elle savait certaines personnes continuent de les transporter. L’homme tira de proche en proche.

Dom siffla entre ses dents, comme elle entrait dans les dix mètres de la paire. L’homme tendit que Dom est arrivé derrière eux. Il saisit la jeune fille aux cheveux roses et tira son dos avec une main rude. Elle a crié, passant son sac de CD et le lecteur de disque. Dom ne pas voir le visage de l’homme, mais elle s’en fichait. Il avait effectué son coup maintenant, elle allait faire le sien.

*****

Able suivi de près les deux descendit le trottoir, une voix lancinante dans sa tête n’arrêtait pas de demander où Dom avait disparu. Il était sûr qu’il avait vu son canard dans une ruelle, mais avait perdu de vue. peu importe, il a dû suivre Claire et s’assurer qu’elle était bien. À un moment donné, il a entendu un commentaire de l’excitation comme une seule personne dans la rue a souligné le toit. Il a pris un coup d’oeil rapide, puis une double prise en voyant l’uniforme rouge et blanc des Canadiens. Il avait lu à propos de vigiles costumés de Montréal, mais n’avait jamais vu de tout près.

“Est-ce blouson Dom-t-il tout bas à lui-même?” comme il a gardé la suite Claire et son harceleur. Il poussa la pensée de côté comme il a vu tomber les Canadiens à la rue et le sprint dans les buissons d’un parc. Able attendu la lumière de changer et j’ai sprinté aussi vite qu’il pouvait traverser la rue.

Il se maudit, comme il a perdu de vue les deux, en regardant autour frénétiquement quelque signe. Sans la moindre idée, il se mit à marcher le long du chemin, dans l’espoir de voir quelque chose. Il entendit un cri, et fit claquer son attention vers la direction, se mettre à courir.

*****

L’homme dévisagea Dom, comme elle a pris un élan en lui avec son poing. Il s’est penché et a déménagé à s’échapper. Dom égalé son mouvement, essayant de le troupeau dans la direction Fréchette lui a parlé. Plusieurs fois il a essayé de contourner Dom, mais finalement abandonné et a couru dans la direction que Dom espérait qu’il le ferait. Elle se retourna vers la jeune fille, et dit d’une voix ferme. “Attends-moi ici!”

Elle a vite couru après l’homme, qui a progressé rapidement à travers les arbres et les buissons. Dom serait en mesure de suivre, elle pouvait courir quand elle avait besoin pour. Tant que quelque chose d’inattendu ne se produise pas.

Elle a percuté le sol dur comme elle a senti quelque chose dans son slam. Très vite, elle se força à se concentrer, en tournant son attention vers ce qui l’a frappée. Ses yeux s’agrandirent quand elle vit que le kilt et veste en cuir connaissent bien usé. “Able!” Elle criait avec surprise qu’elle s’est rapidement sur ses pieds. “Reste avec elle. Je dois y aller.” Elle s’élança à travers les buissons rapidement, en espérant que l’interruption mineure ne serait pas son coût.

Capable se leva et regarda sprint Canadiens au bout de l’attaquant, puis se tourna vers Claire. Il s’approcha d’elle et l’a aidée à récupérer son CD et lecteur de disque. “Ça va, fille?”

“Je suis … Je suis bien,” balbutiait-elle comme elle en tremblant mis ses affaires loin dans le sac en plastique. “Tu la connais?”

“Euh …” Able a commencé comme il le croyait la meilleure façon de répondre. “Kind of. En quelque sorte. Peut-être.” Il soupira légèrement, comme il a aidé Claire à ses pieds. “Non, pas vraiment tout ce que bien, disons que, Luv.”

“Vous m’avez suivi?” A déclaré Claire comme elle s’accrochait au bras de Able.

“Eh bien,” reprit-il avec un haussement d’épaules et un petit sourire. “Moi et Claude vu le gars congé juste après, mais j’ai un peu peur, alors j’ai suivi alors que Claude a appelé les flics.”

“Oh Able,” dit Claire avec un sourire doux comme elle le serra fortement. “Mon héros!”

“C’est … bonne fille,” me répondit-il avec un soupir et tapota l’épaule de Claire à la légère, mais avec une certaine surprise de sa réaction. “Viens. Sortons de cet endroit et voir si nous ne pouvons pas trouver la police.”


Flag on my Backpack: Part Sixteen


Free Man in Paris

Jean Pierre looked at his watch as he stood in the main terminal of Pierre Elliot Trudeau International Airport. He was early for the arrival from Paris, France, but he wanted to make sure he had a lot of time, and he didn’t want his youngest daughter to worry. Fortunately, his office gave him the time to pick up Chloe, as Monika had a gallery engagement that she could not get out of. It had been eight months since Chloe went back to France for her high school education and classes for a hopeful modelling career. But, this year there was a small amount of controversy. Chloe was asked not to return because of an incident. No proof had been established, but there was enough finger pointing in Chloe’s direction that the administrators of the school deemed it necessary to ask Jean Pierre and Monika not to send Chloe back to Paris.

All of it was due to a well guarded secret, even more well guarded than Dominique’s activities as Canadiens. Chloe had a gift, albeit a gift that sometimes got her into trouble. She could channel natural electrical patterns through herself. There were many days Jean Pierre could recall where Dominique and Chloe would get into a shock war. Chloe would lightly rub her feet on the floor and touch her sister’s shoulder, which would send a good electrical current through Dominique. Who would of course, retaliate. Such an action was suspected in the controversy in Paris, though no one could prove it. Jean Pierre knew, however, and he also knew that Chloe did not purposefully wish to harm anyone. It was her aspect of fun.

His thoughts returned to the present as he spotted a well dressed, young woman walking through the terminal. Chloe was the complete opposite of Dominique. Where Dominique was happy with her tattered jeans and a clean tee-shirt, Chloe needed well pressed, name brand clothes. Dominique had a rat’s nest for hair at times, while Chloe wouldn’t go down to breakfast without brushing hers.

Jean Pierre smiled as Chloe saw him. She waved as he walked over to her, giving her a big hug. “Ah it’s been so long, Chloe,” he said with a grin.

“Oui, papa,” Chloe replied with a smile as she returned the hug.

“The flight was alright?” he asked as he lead her through the terminal.

“It was alright. I had a window seat, so I could see when we were coming into Montreal,” she said in a rather forced accent.

Jean Pierre shook his head and chuckled. Chloe was still trying to make herself sound Parisian. “You know, you don’t have to talk like dat, hmm.”

“I know,” Chloe replied with a small sigh. “But I always got teased when I’d speak. Zhey would laugh and say ‘stupid Quebecois’. So, I try an’ talk like dem sometime.”

“You know why they would say dat?” Jean Pierre asked as they stopped to gather Chloe’s luggage. Chloe shook her head as she waited for the answer. “Because they are jealous.” Chloe rolled her eyes as Jean Pierre chuckled lightly. “Come on. We’ll join your mother for lunch. She has a gallery premiere today.”

“Will Dom be at lunch?” Chloe asked with some curiosity.

“Oh, she had some things to take care of today,” Jean Pierre replied with a small shrug. “It’s her day off from work, so she might not show up until supper tonight. But she’s keeping herself out of trouble.”

*****

The backpack was stashed on a rooftop and Dominique sprinted across the rooftops, keeping a sharp eye on the street below. They hadn’t gotten too far ahead, she could still see the girl in the pink hair. But they were heading toward a park, one with small trees and carefully trimmed hedges, and would block Dominique’s view if she tried to use her swing line. “Merde,” she muttered as she dropped to the street below. She’d have to follow close on foot, hopefully catch the man in the grey coat trying to do something.

She sprinted into the bushes, watching as the two walked the paths of the park. The pink haired girl was heading through a shadowed area of the park, the man in the grey coat was closing in on her. It was broad daylight, but not many were in the park itself. Dominique ducked behind a few of the trees as she followed closely, keeping her eyes on the pair. In her jacket pocket, she felt her cell phone vibrate, a minor distraction, but one that did not force her to lose the two she followed.

“’Allo,” she said with a whisper into the cell as she followed along through the trees.

“Dom,” replied the voice on the other end. It was Frechette. “What’s the status?”

“You know dat park jus’ near de education building on McGill campus?” she asked in a whisper. She heard Frechette acknowledge positively. “Dey went t’rough dere, goin’ into the heavy treed paths.”

“Stick wit’ them. If he makes an advance, break it up an’ try to get him to run north. We’re settin’ up a trap there,” Frechette explained quickly.

“Alright,” Dom replied quickly. “Gotta go. He gettin’ closer.” She rang off and slipped the cell phone into her pocket as she moved faster through the trees. She watched as the pink haired girl stopped on the path. She was looking over one of the CD’s again, but this time she was taking out a portable disc player. Dom hadn’t seen one of those in forever, but she knew some people still carried them. The man drew closer and closer.

Dom hissed under her breath as she came within ten yards of the pair. The man reached out as Dom came up behind them. He grabbed the pink haired girl and pulled her back with a rough hand. She screamed, dropping her bag of CD’s and the disc player. Dom didn’t see the man’s face, but she didn’t care. He’d made his move now she was going to make hers.

*****

Able followed closely as the two went down the side walk, a nagging voice in his head kept asking where Dom had gone. He was sure he had seen her duck into an alleyway, but had lost sight of her. Little matter, he had to follow Claire and make sure she was alright. At one point, he heard a comment of excitement as one person on the street pointed to the roof top. He took a quick peek, then a double take as he saw the red and white uniform of Canadiens. He’d read about Montreal’s costumed vigilante, but had never seen her up close.

“Is that Dom’s jacket?” he whispered to himself as he kept following Claire and her stalker. He pushed the thought aside as he saw Canadiens drop to the street and sprint into the bushes of a park. Able waited for the light to change and sprinted as quickly as he could across the street.

He cursed himself as he lost sight of the two, looking around frantically for some sign. Without any clue, he began to walk along the path, hoping to see something. He heard a scream, and snapped his attention toward the direction, breaking into a run.

*****

The man glared at Dom as she took a swing at him with her fist. He ducked and moved to get away. Dom matched his move, trying to herd him in the direction Frechette told her about. Several times he tried to get around Dom, but finally gave up and ran in the direction that Dom was hoping he would. She glanced back to the girl, and said in a firm voice. “Wait ‘ere!”

She ran quickly after the man, who was moving fast through the trees and bushes. Dom would be able to keep up, she could run when she needed to. As long as something unexpected didn’t happen.

She hit the ground hard as she felt something slam into her. Quickly, she forced herself to focus, turning her attention to what hit her. Her eyes widened as she saw the familiar kilt and well worn leather jacket. “Able!” she cried out with surprise as she quickly got to her feet. “Stay wit’ her. I gotta go.” She dashed off through the bushes quickly, hoping that the minor interruption wouldn’t cost her.

Able got to his feet and watched Canadiens sprint off after the attacker, then turned to Claire. He went over to her and helped her pick up her CD’s and disc player. “Ye alright, lass?”

“I’m… I’m okay,” she stammered out as she shakily put her things away into the plastic bag. “You know her?”

“Um…” Able began as he thought how best to answer. “Kinda. Sorta. Maybe.” He sighed slightly as he helped Claire to her feet. “Not really all that well, let’s say that, luv.”

“You followed me?” Claire said as she clung to Able’s arm.

“Well,” he began with a shrug and a small smile. “Me an’ Claude saw the guy leave right after ye, got a little worried, so I followed while Claude called the cops.”

“Oh Able,” Claire said with a soft smile as she hugged him tightly. “My hero!”

“That’s … good, lass,” he replied with a sigh and patted Claire’s shoulder lightly, albeit with some surprise to her reaction. “C’mon. Let’s get outta this place an’ see if we cannu find the police.”


The musical inspiration: Flag on my Backpack


So, I discussed before in a video blog about music being an inspiration for Flag on my Backpack.  So far, each chapter of the series has had a song title as the name.  Each, I named just because it happened to be the song that was playing at the time when I wrote it.  Here’s a description of each of those artists.

Neil Young – Born in Toronto, Ontario, Young is well known in music.  Both as a singer songwriter and as a producer.  Since a boy, Young was always fascinated with music, drawn toward rock and roll, rockabilly and rhythm and blues.  When he was 12, his parents divorced and he moved with his mother back to Winnipeg, Manitoba.  His first band was called the Squires, and while in Fort William (now a part of Thunder Bay, Ontario) Young first met Stephen Stills.  Young would go onto a strong career with the likes of Crosby, Stills and Nash, and Crazyhorse.  His focus became political, as he would be seen as a champion of civil rights.  Through the many awards he has received, Juno and Grammy nominations and wins, he also holds two honourary doctorates and was awarded the Order of Manitoba and is an officer of the Order of Canada.

Nickelback – The band formed with brothers Chad and Mike Kroeger in Hanna, Alberta.  The name came from Mike’s job at Starbucks where he’d give change back by saying “Here’s your nickel back.”  Nickelback has had a large mainstream success, and have had singles that have achieved certified gold in both Canada and the United States.  Nickelback calls Vancouver, British Columbia home.

Rush – Rush is the premiere Canadian arena rock band.  With Geddy Lee on vocals, bass and keyboard, Neil Peart on drums and Alex Lifeson on guitar, the band has been together for over thirty years.  Winning numerous Juno awards, Rush was inducted into the Canadian Music Hall of Fame in 1994.  They are known more for their live performances than their albums, but it is those performances that propel sales.  The band continue to tour, as they are on the last leg of the Clockwork Angels and Time Machine tour.  On June 25, 2010, Rush received a star on the Hollywood Walk of Fame.

Three Days Grace – This Norwood, Ontario band formed in 1992 under the name Groundswell.  After a breakup in 1997, they reformed later that year under their current name.  To date, they have released three studio albums.  2003′s Three Days Grace and 2006′s One-X have been both certified platinum and double platinum in the United States and Canada respectively.  Their present album, Life Starts Now, was released in April, 2009.

Helix – A Canadian rock/metal band that formed in 1974, they are known for the arena rock hit Rock You.  The band continues to record, and has even been mentioned in the television series, The Trailer Park Boys.

Melissa Auf der Maur – Auf der Maur is a Canadian rock musician and professional photographer from Montreal, Quebec.  She has been the bassist for Courtney Love’s Hole and with the Smashing Pumpkins.  Her second solo album was released in March, 2010.  Auf der Maur’s last name refers to (as has been commented) a Swiss river translated to On The Wall.  She holds both Canadian and American citizenship as her father was Canadian and her mother born in the U.S.  She holds a photography major from Concordia University.  Auf der Maur is also active in the social awareness of the environment, and advocated for Doctor David Suzuki during the CBC Television series the Greatest Canadian.

The Guess Who – The Guess Who, from Winnipeg, Manitoba, are best known for their hit American Woman.  Having been together for over thirty-five years, the band’s two best known members are Burton Cummings and Randy Bachman.  Cummings would go onto a successful solo career and Bachman would front the band Bachman-Turner Overdrive, recording the unforgettable Takin’ Care of Business.  Recently, after disputes by both Cummings and Bachman were set aside, the two have reunited with The Guess Who, performing across Canada and the U.S.

Billy Talent at Rock Am See 2007

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Billy Talent – This Mississauga, Ontario band has won several awards, as they have six awards from 25 nominations for the MuchMusic Awards and six awards from 12 nominations for Juno awards.  The band has released four albums and is currently on tour for Billy Talent III.

Luba – Luba Kowalchyk is a Canadian musician, singer, songwriter and recording artist from Montreal, Quebec.  Her best known work came from the 1980′s where she had such hits as Let It Go, Everytime I see Your Picture, Givin’ Away A Miracle and the Percy Sledge cover When A Man Loves a Woman.  She has received a Juno for Female Vocalist of the year.  She continues to record to this day, and remains one of the more popular Canadian female artists even though she has never charted in the United States.

Tragically Hip – From Kingston, Ontario, The Hip, as they are known, are the quintesential Canadian Rock band.  They have released 12 studio albums, 2 live albums and have received numerous Canadian Music awards including 14 Junos.  The Hip’s lyrical work is drawn from events in Canadian history, such as Fifty Mission Cap which details the life and death of Toronto Maple Leaf Bill Barilko, and Wheatkings which is about the story of David Milgard, where for the first time the city of Saskatoon is dubbed “The Paris of the Prairies”, and 38 Years Old which explores the affect of a family and a community after a vicious rape and murder nearly tears them apart.  The ablum Day For Night, released in 1994, has been certified 6x platinum in Canada.  The Hip are also responsible for Another Roadside Attraction, a series of tours across Canada that began in 1992.

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Tom Cochrane and Red Rider – Cochrane was born in Lynne Lake, Manitoba and moved to Achton, Ontario and later Etobicoke at a young age.  Musician and humanitarian, Cochrane is best known for his song Life Is A Highway.  He toured across Canada in the 70′s in coffee houses before moving to Los Angeles where he wrote the theme music for the movie My Pleasure Is My Business.  Unable to find work, he moved back to Toronto, where he drove cab and worked on a Caribean Cruise line.  In 1978, Cochrane met Red Rider at El Mocambo Tavern in Toronto, where he became their lead singer.  He soon became a household name in Canada, and in 1991 began a successful solo career.  Cochrane lives in Toronto where he is an avid golfer, pilot and hockey buff.  In April of 2008, Cochrane was invested as an Officer of the Order of Canada.  He is also an honourary Colonel of the Canadian Air Force’s 409 Nighthawks Tactical Fighter Squadron.  As a part of his investiture weekend in 2008, he experience his second flight in a CF-18.

The Real McKenzies – A scottish themed Celtic/Punk band that calls Vancouver, British Columbia home, the band began in 1992.  Writing original material, they also resurrect traditional Scottish songs, giving them a punk influence.  They have shared stage with Flogging Molly, The Misfits, and Metallica.  They tour extensively, which included a 23 country tour in a van.

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Gowan – Lawrence Gowan is a Scottish born Canadian musician best known for his hits Strange Animal and Criminal Mind.  At the age of 19, Gowan earned an ARCT in classical piano performance from the Royal Conservatory of Music in Toronto, Ontario.  Upon graduation he enjoyed modest success with the band Rhinegold.  His first solo album was in 1992 and featured Kim Mitchell and Max Webster.  Gowan has since become the lead singer for the band Styx, where they perform Criminal Mind during live performances.  Gowan has been nominated for 11 Juno awards, winning in 1985 for Best Album and Best Album Graphics.  In 1998, Gowan receive the National Achievement Award from the Society of Composers, Authors and Music Publishers of Canada (SOCAN).

April Wine – Formed in 1969, they chose the name simply because the band members thought the two words sounded good together.  Hailing from Halifax, Nova Scotia, April Wine has been a mainstay in the Canadian rock scene, having released 29 albums (live, studio and compilation) and two videos.  April Wine has never won a Juno, but has been nominated 11 times.  Myles Goodwin was awarded the lifetime achievement award at the East Coast Music Awards, and April Wine was inducted into the Canadian Music Industry Hall of Fame and awarded with the CMW Lifetime Achievement Award.  In 2008 they were inducted into the East Coast Music Hall of Fame and in 2010 inducted into the Canadian Music Hall of Fame.  They continue to record and tour today.

Honeymoon Suite – Formed in 1982 in Niagra Falls, Ontario, they took their name from the unofficial honeymoon capital of the world for their hometown.  The band kept together until 1991 when Gary Lalonde and Dave Betts left.  In 2007, they announced the original classic lineup returned where they continue to tour Canada and select Northeastern U.S. cities.  Their second album, The Big Prize, saw their greatest success.  Feel It Again reached top 40 status in the States.  Bad Attitude was featured in the television series Miami Vice.  What Does It Take reached #52, strong on its appearance in the John Cusack film One Crazy Summer.

Joni Mitchell – Like Neil Young, Joni Mitchell is well known in the music and arts industries.  Born in Fort Macleod, Alberta, graduating from Aden Bowman Collegiate in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, she was best known as a songwriter first with such hits as Chelsea Morning, Both Sides Now and Woodstock.  She would later become as well known for her singing as well, with her most notable being Big Yellow Taxi and Free Man in Paris.  Mitchell’s father was a Royal Canadian Air Force officer, and the family moved to several bases during the war, finally settling in Saskatchewan after the war, first in Maidstone, then in North Battleford.  Her father finally took a job as a grocer in Saskatoon, which Mitchell refers to as her hometown.  She would later attend the Alberta College of Art and Design in Calgary for a year, during which time she made the acquaintance of another budding singer-songwriter, Harry Chapin.  Mitchell left for Toronto to become a folksinger.  She has won 9 Grammy’s and has been awarded several Canadian Awards, where she is considered a national treasure.  In 2002, she became only the third singer songwriter along with Gordon Lightfoot and Leonard Cohen to be awarded the Companion to the Order of Canada, Canada’s highest civilian honour.  Presently she is an artist, showcasing her work at several galleries.  Saskatoon’s Riverlanding project is looking to build an art gallery along the South Saskatchewan river with one wing of the gallery being dedicated to Mitchell.

Sarah McLachlan – Born in Halifax, Nova Scotia, McLachlan is a singer songwriter known for her emotional ballads and mezzo-soprano vocal range.  McLachlan was adopted as a child, and took voice lessons, along with studies in classical piano and guitar.  When she was 17, she fronted the short-lived rock band called The October Game.  Her high school year book predicted that Sarah was “destined to become a famous rock star.”  In 1996, frustrated with the fact concert promoters and radio stations refused to feature two female musicians back to back, she booked a successful tour for herself and Paula Cole.  One of their appearances in Halifax went by the name Lilith Fair, and included performances by McLachlan, Cole, Lisa Loeb and Michelle McAdorey, formerly of Crash Vegas.  The next year, McLachlan founded the Lilith Fair tour, taking Lilith from the medieval Jewish legend that Lilith was Adam’s first wife.  Subsequent Lilith Fair tours continued in 1998 and 1999 before being discontinued.  Co-founder Terry McBride announced that the all-female festival would make its return in Summer 2010.  McLachlan has been nominated for 21 Juno Awards, recieving 8.  She has won 3 Grammy Awards.  McLachlan has been extensively featured in the media including cover stories for Rolling Stone, Time Magazine, Entertainment Weekly and Flare, a Canadian fashion magazine.  She has also been recognized for her efforts to advance the careers of women in music, receiving the Elizabeth Cady Stanton Visionary Award in 1998.  In 1999, she was appointed as an Officer of the Order of Canada by then Governor General Adrienne Clarkson in recognition of her successful recording career, her role in Lilith Fair and the charitable donations she made to women’s shelters across Canada.  In 2001, she was inducted to the Order of British Columbia.

The Northern Pikes – Hailing from Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, The Pikes, as they are affectionately called, were formed in 1984 under Merl Bryck, Jay Semko, Bryan Potvin and Glen Hollingshead.  Hollingshead left the band shortly after forming and was replaced by Don Schmidt.  Their first wide release album was Big Blue Sky which contained the hit Teenland, penned by Semko.  The band continued to record and tour together until 1993.  Semko went on to have a successful career as a composer, notably composing the music for the television series Due South.  In 1999, the band reunited, releasing a Greatest Hits album and two more studio albums.  Their 1990 album Snow In June became their biggest seller in Canada and the U.S. mostly on the success of the lead single She Ain’t Pretty.  The Pikes have been nominated for five Juno awards, but have never recorded a win.  The Northern Pikes continue to tour across Canada.

All information gathered from wikipedia.

Three more parts to go!  Hope everyone’s been enjoying it thus far.


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